Comments on: Confession http://www.vianegativa.us/2007/08/confession/ How can we live without the unknown before us? —Rene Char Sun, 12 Feb 2012 19:48:49 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Fred Garber http://www.vianegativa.us/2007/08/confession/#comment-5654 Fred Garber Tue, 28 Aug 2007 17:26:52 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/2007/08/23/confession/#comment-5654 I must confess that I like this poem. Confession whether coerced or not can be an agent of change. I must confess that I like this poem. Confession whether coerced or not can be an agent of change.

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]]> By: maria http://www.vianegativa.us/2007/08/confession/#comment-5652 maria Sat, 25 Aug 2007 01:28:48 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/2007/08/23/confession/#comment-5652 add me to the list of those for whom this resonated... I liked the fact that you did not use any punctuation (it made it "grimmer"; but then, grim has never been a problem for me) add me to the list of those for whom this resonated… I liked the fact that you did not use any punctuation (it made it “grimmer”; but then, grim has never been a problem for me)

]]> By: Dave http://www.vianegativa.us/2007/08/confession/#comment-5651 Dave Fri, 24 Aug 2007 23:31:21 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/2007/08/23/confession/#comment-5651 Tumblewords - Thanks. dale - I sure as hell hope not. Tumblewords – Thanks.

dale – I sure as hell hope not.

]]> By: dale http://www.vianegativa.us/2007/08/confession/#comment-5650 dale Fri, 24 Aug 2007 23:24:22 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/2007/08/23/confession/#comment-5650 Am I the only person who found this a distressing poem to read? :-) Am I the only person who found this a distressing poem to read? :-)

]]> By: Tumblewords http://www.vianegativa.us/2007/08/confession/#comment-5649 Tumblewords Fri, 24 Aug 2007 16:47:31 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/2007/08/23/confession/#comment-5649 Well done. Delicious flow and nicely rhythm'd. Well done. Delicious flow and nicely rhythm’d.

]]> By: Dave http://www.vianegativa.us/2007/08/confession/#comment-5648 Dave Fri, 24 Aug 2007 13:55:32 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/2007/08/23/confession/#comment-5648 This Girl - Thanks. I enjoyed making the acquaintance of your own blog and stunning photography. Clare, gautami, and Brett - Thanks for the comments. I really labored over this one, and the subject is decidedly grim, so I'm awfully glad to hear that it resonated with you all. This Girl – Thanks. I enjoyed making the acquaintance of your own blog and stunning photography.

Clare, gautami, and Brett – Thanks for the comments. I really labored over this one, and the subject is decidedly grim, so I’m awfully glad to hear that it resonated with you all.

]]> By: Brett http://www.vianegativa.us/2007/08/confession/#comment-5647 Brett Fri, 24 Aug 2007 13:37:17 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/2007/08/23/confession/#comment-5647 Topical and important poem. I was moved by the part about the desire to feel gravity again, even if while hanging. Topical and important poem. I was moved by the part about the desire to feel gravity again, even if while hanging.

]]> By: gautami http://www.vianegativa.us/2007/08/confession/#comment-5646 gautami Fri, 24 Aug 2007 09:28:31 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/2007/08/23/confession/#comment-5646 Like the promises and changing weather analogy.. Like the promises and changing weather analogy..

]]> By: Clare http://www.vianegativa.us/2007/08/confession/#comment-5645 Clare Fri, 24 Aug 2007 07:32:30 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/2007/08/23/confession/#comment-5645 Really nice flow and imagery. And the last lines "I have been changed/ into something/ I do not know" really touched me, deeply. Really nice flow and imagery. And the last lines “I have been changed/ into something/ I do not know” really touched me, deeply.

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