I have a new version of an old poem up at Reimagining Place, the “rogue companion” to the print journal Ecotone (not to be confused with the now-defunct Ecotone wiki for place-blogging, to which I used to contribute back in 2004-5). Be sure to scroll down and read some of the other contributions to the blogzine’s “Addiction as Ecotone” series. It’s been a pretty cool online experiment, I think, and one I’m happy to be a part of. The editor, David Harris-Gershon, was very generous with his time and helped me craft what I think is a much stronger poem (you can see the original here).
Yes, the revised version of Lines is much more in fighting trim than the original. It seems to trust the reader more and not try to add so many ruffles and frills. Great work.
Hey, thanks!