Comments on: Blue Jeans (magnetic poem) http://www.vianegativa.us/2008/06/blue-jeans-magnetic-poem/ How can we live without the unknown before us? —Rene Char Sun, 12 Feb 2012 19:48:49 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Dave http://www.vianegativa.us/2008/06/blue-jeans-magnetic-poem/#comment-8289 Dave Wed, 02 Jul 2008 01:33:53 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=2439#comment-8289 Hey, thanks. Hey, thanks.

]]> By: one more believer http://www.vianegativa.us/2008/06/blue-jeans-magnetic-poem/#comment-8288 one more believer Tue, 01 Jul 2008 22:13:44 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=2439#comment-8288 came over by way of WRP who had a link to your post for their latest prompt... have been to shuffleboard but never partook... really like the way it turned out... last line is perfect... came over by way of WRP who had a link to your post for their latest prompt… have been to shuffleboard but never partook… really like the way it turned out… last line is perfect…

]]> By: Dave http://www.vianegativa.us/2008/06/blue-jeans-magnetic-poem/#comment-8287 Dave Wed, 25 Jun 2008 17:20:08 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=2439#comment-8287 It is fun. My only criticism of Shuffle Words is that they don't provide any alternatives to the particular choice of words there now. So I can imagine getting rather tired of it after a few times. It is fun. My only criticism of Shuffle Words is that they don’t provide any alternatives to the particular choice of words there now. So I can imagine getting rather tired of it after a few times.

]]> By: christine http://www.vianegativa.us/2008/06/blue-jeans-magnetic-poem/#comment-8286 christine Wed, 25 Jun 2008 16:22:03 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=2439#comment-8286 How our clothes travel, and our words too! A creative way to sift for meaning, like catching words from your mind with a butterfly net. I'm looking forward to trying this. i love the semi-random nature of the process, the game of it, the play. How our clothes travel, and our words too! A creative way to sift for meaning, like catching words from your mind with a butterfly net. I’m looking forward to trying this. i love the semi-random nature of the process, the game of it, the play.

]]> By: Dave http://www.vianegativa.us/2008/06/blue-jeans-magnetic-poem/#comment-8285 Dave Sun, 22 Jun 2008 12:41:01 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=2439#comment-8285 Dana - Your comment just saved this post. I woke up this morning thinking that I really ought to take it down, because it just wasn't up to my (fairly minimal) standards for poetry here. But since you like it, I'll leave it up. A break from poetry might be a good idea for you if it means you keep blogging your memoirs. But there's a lot to be said for writing poems even when one doesn't feel like it, I find. Dana – Your comment just saved this post. I woke up this morning thinking that I really ought to take it down, because it just wasn’t up to my (fairly minimal) standards for poetry here. But since you like it, I’ll leave it up.

A break from poetry might be a good idea for you if it means you keep blogging your memoirs. But there’s a lot to be said for writing poems even when one doesn’t feel like it, I find.

]]> By: Dana http://www.vianegativa.us/2008/06/blue-jeans-magnetic-poem/#comment-8284 Dana Sat, 21 Jun 2008 23:37:56 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=2439#comment-8284 This is a fantastic poem. I like the absurdity but it also makes sense, if that makes any sense. I am really impressed. This (almost) makes me want to write poems again. This is a fantastic poem. I like the absurdity but it also makes sense, if that makes any sense. I am really impressed. This (almost) makes me want to write poems again.

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