Election Day haiku

I went in the booth
to be alone with you lot,
my fellow citizens.

Feel free to leave your own Election Day haiku (or American sentence) in the comments.

18 Responses to “Election Day haiku”

  1. Grey foggy morning.
    I cast my historic vote!
    Now the bright sun shines.

  2. dale says:

    I will love your bright and laughing eyes even if you vote for McCain.

    (I did an American sentence instead. Seemed appropriate.)

  3. essenceoftao says:

    Governing a large country is like cooking a small fish..

  4. Pica says:

    My absentee vote
    cast days ago, before the rain
    And now, the sunshine

  5. Jean says:

    Your election day,
    mine too in this shrinking world:
    our hopes together.

  6. beth says:

    My foreign vote floats off
    in a bottle but today
    I’m what feels adrift

  7. Dave says:

    (dale – Yes. I’ve edited the post to make it clear that American sentences are also welcome.)

  8. Hg says:

    Choose another one
    Make him better than the last
    We’re holding our breath

  9. Brenda says:

    If Barack don’t win
    We’ll welcome him in Kanuk
    To be our PM!

    (Translation: Let me tell you, if you don’t vote Barack Obama for President we’ll be happy to have him as our Prime Minister up here in Canada.)

  10. Dave says:

    A growing reek:
    some farmer has expressed his views
    with a manure spreader.

  11. Lady P says:

    London boy, thirteen,
    Sets his clock for five am.
    “It’s history”, says he.

  12. deb says:

    Bits from voters swirl –
    wagers on democracy.
    Hope trumps past rebukes.

  13. handdrummer says:

    Grey skies lower
    On a day full of Hope,
    Barack Hussein Obama

  14. marja-leena says:

    On tenterhooks,
    Hope and fear for O,
    Even here in Canada

    (as Brenda said, we’ll take him if you don’t)

  15. Lucy says:

    I stumbled awake
    5.30, turned on, broke fast
    on euphoria.

  16. Joan says:

    Yes, I’m thrilled to death, but I am always plagued by irony. Here are a couple of attempts at Haiku.

    We call upon
    Descendent of our oppressed
    To save us from ourselves

    Finally a chance
    For fair share of the pie
    It is already eaten

  17. MB says:

    this morning the light
    seeped through grey clouds, felt its way
    over the landscape

  18. Dave says:

    Thanks, all. Some real gems here!

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