Comments on: Mutating the Signature http://www.vianegativa.us/2008/12/mutating-the-signature/ How can we live without the unknown before us? —Rene Char Sun, 12 Feb 2012 19:48:49 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Dave http://www.vianegativa.us/2008/12/mutating-the-signature/#comment-9485 Dave Tue, 16 Dec 2008 03:03:39 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=3348#comment-9485 Hi Rachel - Thanks for commenting here. I wasn't sure this stuff was any good or not, but you like it, along with Dana, I suppose it must be O.K.! Hi Rachel – Thanks for commenting here. I wasn’t sure this stuff was any good or not, but you like it, along with Dana, I suppose it must be O.K.!

]]> By: Rachel http://www.vianegativa.us/2008/12/mutating-the-signature/#comment-9484 Rachel Mon, 15 Dec 2008 13:54:52 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=3348#comment-9484 I love the account of the process here. I think my favorite of all of these is the one you cobbled together from unused parts: We walk arm in arm on the sunset strip, red at night like a plush coffin lid -- wow. I love the account of the process here. I think my favorite of all of these is the one you cobbled together from unused parts:

We walk arm in arm
on the sunset strip,
red at night like a plush coffin lid

– wow.

]]> By: Dave http://www.vianegativa.us/2008/12/mutating-the-signature/#comment-9483 Dave Tue, 02 Dec 2008 01:00:31 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=3348#comment-9483 Yeah! But keep it quiet, or a lot of poetry workshop teachers could be out of a job. And lord knows what kind of mischief a gang of unemployed poets could get into. Yeah! But keep it quiet, or a lot of poetry workshop teachers could be out of a job. And lord knows what kind of mischief a gang of unemployed poets could get into.

]]> By: Dana http://www.vianegativa.us/2008/12/mutating-the-signature/#comment-9482 Dana Mon, 01 Dec 2008 23:42:08 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=3348#comment-9482 Hi. I hadn't seen your final version. Very cool. You sure did add some words. I think we've found the secret to writing poetry -- write some words, take some away, add some in. That's all there is to it. ;) Hi. I hadn’t seen your final version. Very cool. You sure did add some words. I think we’ve found the secret to writing poetry — write some words, take some away, add some in. That’s all there is to it. ;)

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