Comments on: Bombast http://www.vianegativa.us/2009/01/bombast/ How can we live without the unknown before us? —Rene Char Fri, 10 Sep 2010 19:36:18 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: angie http://www.vianegativa.us/2009/01/bombast/#comment-813559 angie Sat, 10 Jan 2009 23:03:21 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=3635#comment-813559 Like it, especially "Unsing it/goddamn it." Like it,
especially “Unsing it/goddamn it.”

]]> By: Danika (OpenChannel) http://www.vianegativa.us/2009/01/bombast/#comment-813541 Danika (OpenChannel) Sat, 10 Jan 2009 20:58:24 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=3635#comment-813541 Great sound... I have love for internal rhyme, hidden couplet, alliteration and assonance. I grok your word magic. Great sound… I have love for internal rhyme, hidden couplet, alliteration and assonance.

I grok your word magic.

]]> By: Dave http://www.vianegativa.us/2009/01/bombast/#comment-813510 Dave Sat, 10 Jan 2009 17:07:16 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=3635#comment-813510 Thanks for all the comments, folks. I have another poem on the way, but at the moment I'm hard at work on the qarrtsiluni podcast. It's kind of interesting listening to all those apocalyptic poems at once... Thanks for all the comments, folks. I have another poem on the way, but at the moment I’m hard at work on the qarrtsiluni podcast. It’s kind of interesting listening to all those apocalyptic poems at once…

]]> By: robin andrea http://www.vianegativa.us/2009/01/bombast/#comment-813335 robin andrea Sat, 10 Jan 2009 00:49:04 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=3635#comment-813335 I'm glad to read these words, strong and demanding. I think I must have stopped believing that things could be any different, so stopped asking. I’m glad to read these words, strong and demanding. I think I must have stopped believing that things could be any different, so stopped asking.

]]> By: one more believer http://www.vianegativa.us/2009/01/bombast/#comment-813296 one more believer Fri, 09 Jan 2009 21:05:48 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=3635#comment-813296 a silent tune unheard in the alchemy of power and peace... a silent tune unheard in the alchemy of power and peace…

]]> By: Lady P http://www.vianegativa.us/2009/01/bombast/#comment-813294 Lady P Fri, 09 Jan 2009 21:02:38 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=3635#comment-813294 Hmm. Who was it who said "Speaking out is the easy part. Finding a form for one's words with the power to melt hearts and change minds--that's harder"? Ah yes, I <a href="http://identi.ca/notice/1654826">remember</a>. What Deb and Bill said. Hmm. Who was it who said “Speaking out is the easy part. Finding a form for one’s words with the power to melt hearts and change minds–that’s harder”? Ah yes, I remember.

What Deb and Bill said.

]]> By: Deb http://www.vianegativa.us/2009/01/bombast/#comment-813290 Deb Fri, 09 Jan 2009 19:48:56 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=3635#comment-813290 Every line is a missal of shattered life. So well done it hurts. Every line is a missal of shattered life. So well done it hurts.

]]> By: Michelle http://www.vianegativa.us/2009/01/bombast/#comment-813275 Michelle Fri, 09 Jan 2009 18:05:03 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=3635#comment-813275 Unsing it. Unsing it.

]]> By: bev http://www.vianegativa.us/2009/01/bombast/#comment-813271 bev Fri, 09 Jan 2009 17:41:47 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=3635#comment-813271 yes, goddamn it. Stop. yes,
goddamn it.
Stop.

]]> By: gautami tripathy http://www.vianegativa.us/2009/01/bombast/#comment-813265 gautami tripathy Fri, 09 Jan 2009 16:47:24 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=3635#comment-813265 Guts pouring out in this... <a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2009/01/poem-in-draft-somebody-watching-you.html">somebody watching you!</a> Guts pouring out in this…

somebody watching you!

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