Fist

This entry is part 13 of 38 in the series Bridge to Nowhere: poems at mid-life

Brainless head.

Five-member mob.

Core sample for a lead mine.

The last word’s epitaph.

Stump.

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  1. Boy that’s good! A poem like a fist, about a fist. And now it’s stuck like a burr in my mind. Dave, you are one clever, clever man! Well done my friend.

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  2. I was going to comment on the fist-like structure of the poem, but I see I have been beaten to it already. Indeed, well done.

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  3. Thanks, Clive and Maria! Praise from you two makes me think I might’ve gotten it right, though for the longest time yesterday I was convinced that these were only the bare bones of a poem.

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  4. No, hardly bare bones. This was fully fleshed out, albeit in short-hand.

    Great piece of writing, Dave.

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