Jole of Ling

erasure of a page from Samuel Pepys' diary

[In the morning I drank at the Sun,
at the Swan in Fish Street,
at our Goal Feast,
at our Jole of Ling,
and after a good cup of ale I shot a scholar.
I drank at the burial of a young bookseller,
drank to his going.]


Erasure poem derived from The Diary of Samuel Pepys, Friday 20 January 1659/60.

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  1. seems to me that erasure poetry would make a great small group activity…everybody starts with the same material. Maybe alcoholic beverages could be involved.

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    1. Yes! I’ve generated at least two different erasures for almost every page of Pepys’ diary so far myself.

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  2. What is a ‘jole of Ling’? Having the same problem with Pepys.

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    1. According to the annotations for that entry, it’s the head (“jowl”) of a type of codfish, the common ling. I just liked the sound of the phrase!

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