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  1. I just love the flow and rhythm and tone of this, which are all so expressive (as well as the subject, of course).


    1. Thank you, Jean. I’d kind of gotten away from enjambment for the last couple of years, but I think it works here, and I’m thinking of trying to integrate it into my poems more often from now on.

  2. lucychili

    wonderful. both the creature and the words. thanks j

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