1. I just love the flow and rhythm and tone of this, which are all so expressive (as well as the subject, of course).

    • Thank you, Jean. I’d kind of gotten away from enjambment for the last couple of years, but I think it works here, and I’m thinking of trying to integrate it into my poems more often from now on.

  2. lucychili

    wonderful. both the creature and the words. thanks j

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