Devotional

erasure of a page from Samuel Pepys' diary

I ate the key to keep
the morning private,

took the Pope’s head and his silver hatband
to do him a courtesy.

I pray God to receive my ham.
I lay all night with my marrow bone.


Erasure poem derived from The Diary of Samuel Pepys, Thursday 22 March 1659/60.

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  1. I love ‘I ate the key to keep the morning private’!

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    1. Thanks! I liked that too, and was a bit annoyed with Mr. Pepys for not giving me the words to expand that thought in the direction I wanted. This erasure business is a continuing exercise in humility.

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  2. Like this one very much! I came across your blog on Diane Lockward’s blog list. I will keep visiting. The title of the blog drew me in.

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    1. Hi Anne — thanks for visiting. I’m glad to hear that “Via Negativa” drew you in. I think it scares a lot of people off, too!

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  3. I too was really pleased to stumble upon this blog and your reinvention of Samuel Pepys words

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  4. where is my marrow bone?

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