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		<title>Man or beast</title>
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					<description><![CDATA[a little boy turned 
into me but not 

the beast I disturb  
night after night 

suffering with his small estate 
under my bed]]></description>
										<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><span style="color: #dddddd;">Up by break of day, and then to my vials a while, and so to Sir W. Warren’s by agreement, and after talking and eating something with him, he and I down by water to Woolwich, and there I did several businesses, and had good discourse, and thence walked to Greenwich; in my way <span style="color: #000000;">a little boy</span> overtook us with a fine cupp <span style="color: #000000;">turned</span> out of Lignum Vitae, which the poor child confessed was made in the King’s yard by his father, a turner there, and that he do often do it, and that I might have one, and God knows what, which I shall exam<span style="color: #000000;">in</span>e. Thence <span style="color: #000000;">to</span> Sir W. Warren’s again, and there drew up a contract for masts which he is to sell us, and so ho<span style="color: #000000;">me</span> to dinner, finding my poor wife busy.</span><br />
<span style="color: #dddddd;">I, after dinner, to the office, and then to White Hall, to Sir G. Carteret’s, <span style="color: #000000;">but</span> did <span style="color: #000000;">not</span> speak with him, and so to Westminster Hall, God forgive me, thinking to meet Mrs. Lane, but she was not there, but here I met with Ned Pickering, with whom I walked 3 or 4 hours till evening, he telling me the whole business of my Lord’s folly with this Mrs. Becke, at Chelsey, of all which I am ashamed to see my Lord so grossly play <span style="color: #000000;">the beast</span> and fool, to the flinging off of all honour, friends, servants, and every thing and person that is good, and only will have his pr<span style="color: #000000;">i</span>vate lust un<span style="color: #000000;">disturb</span>ed with this common whore his sitting up <span style="color: #000000;">night after night</span> alone, <span style="color: #000000;">suffering</span> nobody to come to them, and all the day too, casting off Pickering, basely reproaching him <span style="color: #000000;">with his small estate</span>, which yet is a good one, and other poor courses to obtain privacy beneath his honour, and with his carrying her abroad and playing on his lute <span style="color: #000000;">under</span> her window, and forty other poor sordid things, which I am grieved to hear; but believe it to no purpose for me to meddle with it, but let him go on till God Almighty and his own conscience and thoughts of his lady and family do it. So after long discourse, to my full satisfaction but great trouble, I home by water and at my office late, and so to supper to <span style="color: #000000;">my</span> poor wife, and so to <span style="color: #000000;">bed</span>, being troubled to think that I shall be forced to go to Brampton the next Court, next week.</span></p>
<p>a little boy turned<br />
into me but not</p>
<p>the beast I disturb<br />
night after night</p>
<p>suffering with his small estate<br />
under my bed</p>
<p><em><br />
Erasure poem derived from The Diary of Samuel Pepys, <a href="http://www.pepysdiary.com/diary/1663/09/09/" rel="nofollow">Wednesday 9 September 1663</a>.</em></p>
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		<title>Wayfare</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 10 Sep 2026 02:09:37 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[the common way comes out of 
one eye on the road 

other places cost me 
all my mind to understand 

I saw a window 
I never saw my life]]></description>
										<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><span style="color: #dddddd;">Up and to my viall a while, and then to my office on Phillips having brought me a draught of the Katherine yacht, prettily well done for <span style="color: #000000;">the common way</span> of doing it. At the office all the morning making up our last half year’s account to my Lord Treasurer, which <span style="color: #000000;">comes</span> to 160,000l. or there ab<span style="color: #000000;">out</span>s, the proper expense of this half year, only with an addition <span style="color: #000000;">of 1</span>3,000l. for the third due of the last account to the Treasurer for his disbursements, and 1100l. for this half year’s; so that in thre<span style="color: #000000;">e ye</span>ars and a half his thirds come to 14,100l.. Dined at home with my wife. It being washing day, we had a good pie baked of a leg of mutt<span style="color: #000000;">on</span>; and then to my office, and <span style="color: #000000;">the</span>n ab<span style="color: #000000;">road</span>, and among <span style="color: #000000;">other places</span> to Moxon’s, and there bought a payre of globes <span style="color: #000000;">cost me</span> 3l. 10s., with which I am well pleased, I buying them princip<span style="color: #000000;">all</span>y for <span style="color: #000000;">my</span> wife, who has a <span style="color: #000000;">mind to understand</span> them, and I shall take pleasure to teach her. But here <span style="color: #000000;">I saw</span> his gre<span style="color: #000000;">a</span>t <span style="color: #000000;">window</span> in his dining room, where there is the two Terrestrial Hemispheres, so painted as <span style="color: #000000;">I never saw</span> in <span style="color: #000000;">my life</span>, and nobly done and to good purpose, done by his own hand.</span><br />
<span style="color: #dddddd;">Thence home to my office, and there at business late, and then to supper home and to bed, my people sitting up longer than ordinary before they had done their washing.</span></p>
<p>the common way comes out of<br />
one eye on the road</p>
<p>other places cost me<br />
all my mind to understand</p>
<p>I saw a window<br />
I never saw my life</p>
<p><em><br />
Erasure poem derived from The Diary of Samuel Pepys, <a href="http://www.pepysdiary.com/diary/1663/09/08/" rel="nofollow">Tuesday 8 September 1663</a>.</em></p>
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		<title>Poetry Blog Digest 2026, Week 36</title>
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					<description><![CDATA[A personal selection of posts from around the Anglophone blogosphere.]]></description>
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<p class="wp-block-paragraph"><em><em>A personal selection of posts from around the Anglophone blogosphere, including Substack, with a commitment to following a somewhat haphazardly chosen selection of poets, poetry lovers, literary critics and publishers over time. Although I tend to quote my favorite bits, please do click through and read the whole posts. You can also browse the <a href="https://www.vianegativa.us/category/smorgasblog/">blog digest archive at Via Negativa</a> or, if you&#8217;d like it in your inbox, <a href="https://davebonta.substack.com/">subscribe on Substack</a> (where the posts might be truncated by some email providers).</em></em></p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph"><em>This week, maps argue among themselves, the dark blooms and sings, a bookcase holds its breath, moths interrogate a porch light, and much more. Enjoy.</em></p>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">On the first day of September I am woken by geese flying over the house. They’re still going back and forth between two lakes right now, strengthening their wings, preparing for the long flights they’ll make in a few weeks. The sound is superb. They fly so low that I can hear their wing beats. The new season begins with watching the sky while the coffee burbles in the pot. I stand at the back door, the kitchen filled with low sunlight and long shadows, the garden white with dew and I listen to the plush feathery wing beats of geese over the house. Their calls are dark mornings and woodsmoke, and deep work, creative work. I take my coffee up to my writing room and settle in front of the monitor.</p>
<cite>Wendy Pratt, <a href="https://wendypratt.substack.com/p/i-want-to-show-my-workings-out" target="_blank" rel="noopener">I want to show my workings out</a></cite></blockquote>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">I’ve been in a state of ennui and mild hopelessness all summer, and I haven’t written since the Lenten Series earlier in the year. I needed some fresh oxygen. I bought a brand-new journal and headed to my neighborhood library, armed with a pen, a back up pen, and Lofi beats in my headphones. Regardless of output, I just wanted to feel the sensation of a pen moving across paper, my thoughts flowing freely and without distraction, and reconnect with my natural rhythm and intuition.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">I’m a little surprised at how well it worked. There is something magical about the process of simply journaling, without expectation, without anxiety about “creating” or self-made pressure to produce. Threads come together in mysterious ways, your brain makes quiet connections, and somewhere in that tangled tree-light of messy ink, something begins to emerge that you can use as starter. I don’t know where it’s all going to go—I don’t have any big themes in mind for a series or any heart-pounding flashes of inspiration to run with, but it’s an opening, and that’s all I needed.</p>
<cite>Kristen McHenry, <a href="https://kristenmchenry.substack.com/p/fall-metaphors" target="_blank" rel="noopener">Fall Metaphors</a></cite></blockquote>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">i go out in the morning<br>without my skin. i rush back inside<br>to put it on. the moment of light<br>free of all the flesh felt like<br>swallowing an antidote. what would<br>it take for all of us to write on the sun<br>like a marble notebook? everyone i know<br>puts their dreams into little envelopes.<br>mails them to a fire on the other side<br>of the world.</p>
<cite>Robin Gow, <a href="https://robingow.com/2026/09/04/9-4-5/">sunlight diary</a></cite></blockquote>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">After fiddling with wires and remote controls and instructions on my mobile phone for half an hour I was ready to strike out for that corner shop, which is just over a mile from my house.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">I almost went in the car, before realising that it would be more pleasant, healthy, and green to walk there, especially as I could take a path through woodland for about four fifths of the trip.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Walking through woodland is always rewarding, even if the particular woodland near me is very small, in parts not much more than a tree lined path, which may contain traces of dog shit.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Woods are poetic. We all know some poetry set in woods. Perhaps one of the most well known contains these lines:</p>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—<br>I took the one less travelled by</p>
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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">However, I am not quite the literary gentleman I think myself to be. Before turning to Robert Frost, my mind always defaults to…</p>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">A mouse took a walk in a deep, dark wood<br>The mouse found a nut and the nut looked good</p>
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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">… the concluding lines from Julia Donaldson’s <em>The Gruffalo</em>, the well-known 1999 book for reading with small children. [&#8230;]</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">A walk in the woods is a real mood lifter. Everyone with any sense knows so. Tree huggers, forest bathers, and normal people too. I am privileged to live within walking distance of several. Some of them are old and overgrown cemeteries too, which is doubly poetic. Not only do you get the sense of nature all around, but also the sense of your own impermanence within it. Those crumbling headstones and statuary reminding us that none of us live forever, and the unkempt vegetation reminding us that nature will go on thriving long after we are gone.</p>
<cite>Mike O&#8217;Brien, <a href="https://zoomburst.substack.com/p/gruffalo-tree-huggers-and-wood-pigeons" target="_blank" rel="noopener">Gruffaloes, Tree Huggers and Wood Pigeons</a></cite></blockquote>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">This poem grew from&nbsp;<em>8</em>’s emphasis on the contrast between darkness and light. I began the idea with the image of the dark forest trail leading to the opening above a valley covered in light. I was thinking of the contrast, of this and the other, of darkness and light, and then I started writing. A storm moved in, and I began listening to music. When I viewed the video poem&nbsp;<a href="https://substack.com/@literarygypsy/note/p-211468812?r=ecedq&amp;utm_source=notes-share-action&amp;utm_medium=web"><em>All the Places Light Lives</em></a>&nbsp;by&nbsp;<a href="https://open.substack.com/users/8064904-amantine-brodeur?utm_source=mentions" target="_blank" rel="noopener">Amantine Brodeur</a>&nbsp;and&nbsp;<a href="https://open.substack.com/users/7154913-alix-klingenberg?utm_source=mentions" target="_blank" rel="noopener">Alix Klingenberg</a>, the connection between the words and the imagery of each photograph began to speak to me. I connected with that process. The poem began to move. The difficulty in this piece was that it was demanding the approach of less is more. Keeping this piece to a few lines was a major task. Only the essentials remained.</p>
<cite>Sam Rasnake, <a href="https://samrasnake.substack.com/p/new-poem-the-basement-stacks-9" target="_blank" rel="noopener">New poem, “The Basement Stacks; 9”</a></cite></blockquote>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">you walk the usual path&nbsp;<br>when suddenly you have passed&nbsp;<br>through a doorway you did not see&nbsp;<br>the landscape has changed&nbsp;<br>the road signs are in a language&nbsp;<br>you do not read there are maps&nbsp;<br>but they argue among themselves&nbsp;</p>
<cite>Sharon Brogan, <a href="https://sbpoet.com/2026/09/03/snapshot-poem-02-september-02026/" target="_blank" rel="noopener">snapshot poem 02 september 02026</a></cite></blockquote>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Lucille Clifton’s “telling our stories” found me during a particularly rough stretch this spring. (I include a link to the poem&nbsp;<a href="https://gooduniversenextdoor.com/2026/09/06/poems-about-wild-animals/#poems-about-wild-animals">below</a>.) I was feeling haunted by some troubling flashbacks, and when I read, “the fox came every evening to my door” (and the lines that follow), I related immediately to Clifton’s fear and avoidance.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">I also understood the depth of her connection to the fox. Dare I say, I understood it as a&nbsp;<em>relationship</em>&nbsp;with the fox… and with the “terrible stories” it — and the poet watching it — could tell. I felt deep resonance with the poem, and it spurred an obsession with fox imagery. I even had a close encounter this summer with a wild fox which had claimed a busy Cape Cod beach town as her hunting ground.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">The Cape Cod fox startled me and I shooed her away, but normally when encountering wild life, I’m the sort of person who believes I’m having a shared moment with the creature. I even introduce myself to toads and newts. “I’m a human,” I say, and what I mean is I hold myself in high regard as the type of human an animal might like to know and befriend. When I hold the gaze of a deer or bird or, yes, a fox, I experience a true connection.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Intellectually, that connection is hogwash, of course. But spiritually? I’m a believer.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">So when I read “Driving to Santa Fe” by Paisley Rekdal in a writing workshop from Two Sylvias Press (through their “<a href="https://twosylviaspress.substack.com/" target="_blank" rel="noopener">Weekly Muse</a>” Substack), I knew I needed to collect poems about wild animal encounters. The speaker in Rekdal’s poem [&#8230;] comes upon a lynx crossing the road. Time slows, creating space for the speaker to understand what it means to be alive and to be humbled by it.</p>
<cite>Carolee Bennett, <a href="https://gooduniversenextdoor.com/2026/09/06/poems-about-wild-animals/" target="_blank" rel="noopener">“the fox came every evening to my door”</a></cite></blockquote>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">I took this photograph not understanding that perhaps it is a kind of self portrait. Balancing on one foot along the shoreline. The gull’s mottled coloring and black beak make me think she is a juvenile glaucous winged gull. It’s an unusual pose but as I stayed and observed her, she kept her balance and I hope I can do the same this September. But I am not so sure.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">This is the last time I’ll begin the academic school year as a full-time tenured professor at Highline College where I will have taught for 27 years. Before I moved to Seattle, for this tenure track job teaching English and Film at Highline, five years was the longest I’d held any job. In my twenties and thirties, I changed countries seven times.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Now taking the water taxi downtown for the day is an adventure. I’ve just become a member at&nbsp;<a href="https://www.folioseattle.org/" target="_blank" rel="noopener">Folio: The Seattle Anthenaeum,</a>&nbsp;located above the marketplace so the 15 minute water taxi commute will become more frequent. This is my first step in my retirement planning. My only one. Well, besides writing more poems.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">At the moment, I’m working on two poems. One concerns a visit to my translator’s home in a refugee camp outside Ramallah in 1996 and the other is a memory of everyday life at three years old. </p>
<cite>Susan Rich, <a href="https://susanrichpoet.substack.com/p/three-images-and-prompts-before-summer" target="_blank" rel="noopener">Three Images and Prompts Before Summer Ends</a></cite></blockquote>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">The rest of the week was spent updating my resume (I’m tentatively looking for work again), writing poems, submitting poems (although not to&nbsp;<em>Cincinnati Review</em>&nbsp;or<em>&nbsp;Prairie Schooner</em>, which both closed in under a day, before I got in a submission, whew! Crazy! Submitting is an adventure sport these days.) Also, re-reading Tracy K. Smith’s&nbsp;<em>Life on Mars</em>&nbsp;for book club. [&#8230;] </p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Late summer all around—hot air balloons going up and down, hummingbirds at the final blooms of summer flowers, and earlier sunsets.</p>
<cite>Jeannine Hall Gailey, <a href="https://webbish6.com/september-submissions-with-stressful-intervals-storms-and-late-summer-sights/" target="_blank" rel="noopener">September Submissions with Stressful Intervals, Storms, and Late Summer Sights</a></cite></blockquote>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">I’ve so many posts unposted, and a million distractions … but it seems important to share a Wendell Berry poem this morning.</p>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">To Know the Dark</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">To go in the dark with a light is to know the light.<br>To know the dark, go dark. Go without sight,<br>and find that the dark, too, blooms and sings,<br>and is traveled by dark feet and dark wings.</p>
<cite>–Wendell Berry, from <em>The Selected Poems</em></cite></blockquote>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph"><a href="https://www.nytimes.com/2026/08/31/us/wendell-berry-dead.html">https://www.nytimes.com/2026/08/31/us/wendell-berry-dead.html</a></p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Also see&nbsp;<a href="https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poets/wendell-berry">Poetry Foundation</a>, and this page at&nbsp;<a href="https://grateful.org/resource/our-real-work-poem-wendell-berry/">Grateful Living</a>&nbsp;for a poem I’ve read dozens of times these past few years, &nbsp;Berry’s “Our Real Work.”</p>
<cite>Bethany Reid, <a href="https://www.bethanyareid.com/wendell-berry-1934-2026/" target="_blank" rel="noopener">Wendell Berry (1934-2026)</a></cite></blockquote>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">I was sad to hear of the death of Wendell Berry on Monday.&nbsp; But why should I be sad?&nbsp; He was 92 and had lived a good life, mostly on his own terms, from what I could see.&nbsp; But the death felt like &#8220;one of the greats has left us&#8221; moments.&nbsp; I remember reading him in college, so his writing has been with me a long time.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Back in my undergraduate days,&nbsp; I felt somewhat embarrassed for liking someone whose work was so accessible.&nbsp; Now, of course, I think it&#8217;s one of his more important traits.&nbsp; Berry&#8217;s work has seemed vital for decades now.<br><br>What I value most these days is his ability to never sink into gloom for too long. He manages to sound prophetic (one of the prophet&#8217;s duties being to call people back to right living, as well as to warn), without setting up a house in the land of the apocalypse. He always comes back to one of his main themes: &#8220;. . . hope is one of our duties. A part of our obligation to our own being and to our descendants is to study our life and our condition, searching always for the authentic underpinnings of hope. And if we look, these underpinnings can still be found. For one thing, though we have caused the earth to be seriously diseased, it is not yet without health. The earth we have before us now is still abounding and beautiful&#8221; (&#8220;Conservation and Local Economy&#8221; from&nbsp;<em>Sex, Economy, Freedom, and Community</em>, page 11).<br><br>He wrote those words almost 20 years ago, and yet, they still have relevance.&nbsp; Some days, when the news seems unrelentingly bad, it&#8217;s hard to continue to hope.&nbsp; But it&#8217;s one of the more important activities we can undertake.<br><br>Here&#8217;s a passage that reminds us of the miracles which surround us each day:&nbsp; &#8220;Whoever really has considered the lilies of the field or the birds of the air and pondered the improbability of their existence in this warm world within the cold and empty stellar distances will hardly balk at the turning of water into wine&#8211;which was, after all, a very small miracle. We forget the greater and still continuing miracle by which water (with soil and sunlight) is turned into grapes&#8221; (&#8220;Christianity and the Survival of Creation&#8221; from&nbsp;<em>Sex, Economy, Freedom, and Community</em>, page 103).<br><br>That passage made me gasp when I first read it, and it still does.</p>
<cite>Kristin Berkey-Abbott, <a href="http://kristinberkey-abbott.blogspot.com/2026/09/farewell-wendell-berry.html" target="_blank" rel="noopener">Farewell, Wendell Berry</a></cite></blockquote>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">The writer Wendell Berry often talked about how imagination is required in order to have hope. To imagine is to see a way. “For humans to have a responsible relationship to the world, they must imagine their places in it.” When the tiny first leaves arrived after a few weeks, I continued the routine of light and water. The work of beckoning growth was not complete. Meanwhile, the soil outside grew soft with spring’s warmth and rains, so I turned it with my hands. Into the soil, I placed worms I have also grown and fostered over the past couple of years. Eventually, the ceremony of carrying the trays up the basement steps arrived and the seedlings saw sun for the first time. They learned&nbsp;<em>outside</em>. They learned&nbsp;<em>wind</em>.</p>
<cite>Sarah Lada, <a href="https://myheadtheforest.substack.com/p/the-art-of-harvesting-brussels-sprouts" target="_blank" rel="noopener">The Art of Harvesting Brussels Sprouts</a></cite></blockquote>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">It manifests many worlds theory, shimmer within lines and word choices, so that all components are &#8220;drafts&#8221; stemming, branching. A commitment to an experiment for decades. And there are wonderful personal moments, with this contingent willingness to have one&#8217;s life be contextualised.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">I was very lucky to see her read over zoom with Allen Fisher reading too. It was noticeable how curious she was about Allen&#8217;s formal choices and long poem procedures.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">I love her book of critical essays on the long poems of others too. Like Alice Notley, a great master of unpacking technique and then trying new techniques herself (and not as pastiche, but as someone whose creative brain was revved up by reading FOR FORM, not sentiment).</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Her death is a great loss. But I&#8217;m so glad she finished Drafts and got it to a handsome complete edition. It is best read complete, in my opinion, and a modern masterpiece when seen in one edition.</p>
<cite>Ira Lightman, <a href="https://iralightman1.substack.com/p/rachel-blau-duplessis-rip" target="_blank" rel="noopener">Rachel Blau Duplessis RIP</a></cite></blockquote>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">If you’ve never eaten at a South Indian wedding, then imagine this: at least thirty different dishes served on a large plantain leaf, non-stop, until you cannot possibly eat another morsel. But of course, you do! A hundred textures, a hundred permutations of flavour and colour and aroma, inundate your senses and you stagger out, not just sated, but telling yourself you simply should be more social and attend more weddings. If only for the food.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">This book was that meal. At 240 pages, it is an extensive collection of fifteen years of Bob Mee’s work. The breadth of skill, imagination, topics, style and form is overwhelming. The poems zigzag across a vast landscape of masterful storytelling, wry humour, barely-concealed disgust at the state of the world, surreal imagination, love, and memory,</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">It is almost impossible to pick a favourite poem or line because his content and frequent stream-writing flit from the past to the present, from politics to pig-farming, from scarecrows to neighbours, from Pennsylvania to Peterlee, from haunted bars to forgers, from Ezra Pound’s trombone to the ghost of Ginsberg, from pianos on the move to a little girl sold in marriage, from the dead to the living, from war zones to the bottom of the sea (‘<em>Poems leave Gaza, Ukraine, Iran, Lebanon, Russia, Sudan. Reach out, gather them in.</em>’ &#8211; Poems), until the reader is convinced that everything that has to be said about literally everything that needs saying, has been said, and said in the only way possible. Mee employs laugh-out-loud satire and humorous irreverence or dispensing with obscure subtlety, writes with delicate but chilling honesty.</p>
<cite>Rajani Radhakrishnan, <a href="https://rajaniradhakrishnan.substack.com/p/poems-in-the-key-of-aardvark-by-bob" target="_blank" rel="noopener">‘Poems In The Key Of Aardvark’ by Bob Mee – If you’re going to read only one more book this year, pick this one</a></cite></blockquote>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Here is a poet in the midst of it and still writing about it every day. I can barely imagine how he keeps on keeping on, but the sequence of poems entitled&nbsp;<em>Writing My Country</em>&nbsp;continues to hold power up to the light and to find it wanting.</p>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">These poems of compassion and loss and obstinate resistance use everyday events, conversations and observations on the street to illustrate ‘this ruinous work’ that is taking place in a country that no longer feels like home.</p>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">The altered flag on the cover seems to speak of imprisonment and disempowerment, but the poem superimposed on it asks stubborn questions that will not be silenced.</p>
<cite>Ama Bolton, <a href="https://barleybooks.wordpress.com/2026/09/04/writing-my-country/" target="_blank" rel="noopener">Writing My Country</a></cite></blockquote>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">their viscous prick-song spit into<br>the wind. an old, infectious fable. says<br>that it will fill them up. it cannot fill<br>them up, so makes instead a virtue<br>of their emptiness, a weapon of their<br>emptiness. they are <em>not </em>men, not now –<br>the hot and crackling aggregate<br>of rage. now they are joy, torn along<br>its leanest length; the gutless conjuring<br>of power, each hood without a head.</p>
<cite>Fran Lock, <a href="https://franlock.substack.com/p/noli-timere" target="_blank" rel="noopener">NOLI TIMERE</a></cite></blockquote>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">I have, out of an abundance of caution, not named the Iranian poet whose interview with me I’ve been posting here one question at a time. Perhaps I am being too careful, but given the fact that we are at war with Iran, even if the federal government is going out of its way not to call what’s going on a war; given the corresponding fact that Iran very clearly understands itself to be at war with us; and, finally, given how literature—writing it, reading it, discussing it—is an inherently subversive pursuit, an abundance of caution seems just the right amount. I’ve tried several times to get in touch with this poet since the war began but have had no success. If I do hear back from them and it turns out I can safely identify them, I will do so. In the meantime, I am going to continue posting my answers to their questions.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">I was not expecting the poet’s fourth question: “There is a theory that says that all writers even the male, write with a feminine soul. After all, the Muses were goddesses and not gods. What do you think about this theory?” This was my answer:</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">While I think I understand what you want your question to mean, it has never been useful to me to think about where my work comes from in such explicitly gendered terms. I have never experienced myself as having a muse or my poems as being somehow “gifts” from the Muses. Indeed, the one and only time anyone ever talked to me about my having a muse was my graduate advisor, a critical theorist, who dismissed my desire to take a year off from the MA in Creative Writing that I was pursuing so I could work on my writing by saying, “If you want to go commune with your&nbsp;<em>muse</em>&nbsp;[the sarcasm literally dripped off his words], that’s your business. I thought you came to graduate school to learn something.”</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">His words had the precise opposite of their intended effect. I dropped out of the program that semester and never set foot in either a graduate English or Creative Writing program ever again. (I’ve written the longer version of this story&nbsp;<a href="https://majusculelit.com/i-was-a-creative-writing-program-dropout/" target="_blank" rel="noopener">here</a>.) In thinking about your question, though—and I have to say that this is something I’ve never explicitly articulated before—I realize that I do agree with one aspect of the critique underwriting my advisor’s attempt to use the notion of the muse to shame me. The concept of the muse mystifies the creative process, turning it into something that is ostensibly separate and apart from the socioeconomic, political, and cultural circumstances in which creativity takes place.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">I don’t mean to say, of course, that there is no such thing as inspiration; and I certainly would never tell a poet who experiences inspiration as somehow coming from outside themselves, who experiences poems as “gifts” from their muse, that this experience is somehow “wrong.” However, defining that experience in a way that elides the role played by society and culture in shaping both our conception of what inspiration is and how we give meaning to a poet’s response to inspiration ultimately weakens the role that the poet and poetry can play in society.</p>
<cite>Richard Jeffrey Newman, <a href="https://www.fernwoodpress.com/2026/09/06/do-all-writers-write-with-a-feminine-soul/" target="_blank" rel="noopener">Do All Writers Write with a Feminine Soul?</a></cite></blockquote>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">“What the Mirror Tells” explores the origins of the word ‘mirror’ – from Middle English meaning “object with a reflective surface, reflection, model of conduct” and Anglo-French “to look at”, derived from the Latin “to be surprised, look with wonder at”. It also asks if events and people linger long after their passing, does an aurora of those still hang around? [&#8230;]</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">In each poem, [Denise] O’Hagan has created a small theatre where readers see the show and get [a] chance to reflect and probe its meaning. She also picks up those hesitations, where speaking out may not be received in the way the speaker wants to achieve, where it might shatter an illusion. Many of the poems sit in that liminal space between an event and [its] consequences, allowing the reader to fill in the detail and decide what might have next, what the effect might be. These are thought-provoking and humane poems.</p>
<cite>Emma Lee, <a href="https://emmalee1.wordpress.com/2026/09/02/what-the-mirror-tells-denise-ohagan-5-islands-press-book-review/" target="_blank" rel="noopener">“What the Mirror Tells” Denise O’Hagan (5 Islands Press) – book review</a></cite></blockquote>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">One thing I’m realising more and more as I write these pieces is that I acquired much of my poetry in a decidedly circuitous and fumbling manner. Philip Larkin came to me third-hand: at sixteen I hadn’t read a word of his poetry, and I hadn’t read Andrew Motion’s reportedly honest and affectionate biography of him, but I had read Alan Bennett’s honest and affectionate review of Andrew Motion’s reportedly honest and affectionate biography of him. The things we did before the internet. So Larkin arrived kind of distorted, a figure peered at through the wrong end of a telescope and through the lenses of two other men, this grumpy man in glasses who shagged his way round the library personnel of the North of England and had a soft spot for both Thatcher and Hitler, the kind of guy who’d take a girl on a date and later write to his friend</p>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Based on this picture, I assumed that his poetry probably wouldn’t be for me, and I moved on. I was about to be swept off my feet by Dylan Thomas, who I hadn’t read a review of a biography of, so that was fine.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">But over the years Larkin poems dropped quietly one by one into my life:&nbsp;<em>This Be The Verse,&nbsp;</em>of course<em>,&nbsp;</em>and then&nbsp;<em>The Trees, An Arundel Tomb, The Mower.&nbsp;</em>I found it hard to compute, having read the biographical stuff first, that the man who wrote such tenderness as</p>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">and</p>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">was in fact the same bloke who Motion refers to as ‘a sexually disappointed Eeyore’. Well, this is why you’re supposed to meet the poems before the poet, and sometimes not the poet at all. Poets are real people, and flawed. It’s the poems that keep us fond of Larkin.</p>
<cite>Nia Broomhall, <a href="https://niaspoetrybookshelf.substack.com/p/week-25-high-windows" target="_blank" rel="noopener">Week 25: High Windows</a></cite></blockquote>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">In Boswell’s&nbsp;<em><a href="https://jacklynch.net/Texts/smart.html" target="_blank" rel="noopener">Life</a></em>, Samuel Johnson says of poor Christopher Smart (1722–1771), locked in a madhouse: “I did not think he ought to be shut up. His infirmities were not noxious to society. He insisted on people praying with him; and I’d as lief pray with Kit Smart as any one else.”</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">That line, “I’d as lief pray with Kit Smart as any one else,” has stuck with me since I first encountered it. Christopher Smart was a madman, a genius, and a Christian poet. What is most powerful in him, or, at least has most influenced me, is his mysticism, for it is not a grand thing — not the loss of the self in the absorption into the numinous, not&nbsp;<a href="https://www.ccel.org/ccel/plotinus/enneads.vii.ix.html" target="_blank" rel="noopener">the flight of the alone to the Alone</a>, not the ecstatic transport to the oneness of reality. Smart is instead the model — even in his madness, or maybe&nbsp;<em>especially</em>&nbsp;in his madness — of what I have elsewhere called the mysticism of small things.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">This is not pantheism, each object in the world a little God-bit. It cannot be for Smart, because pantheism is irreconcilable with his orthodox Christianity — but even more because pantheism is ultimately a denial of the sharp and vital particularity of things. Christopher Smart sees every living being as entirely itself: distinctive, singular, quirky, special. And in that particularity he sees not God, but God’s grace, God’s plan, and, most of all, God’s creation — a creative power so vast that it can populate the world with real existences that are not God Himself. Smart sees the world as infused with grace, hungry for redemption, and alive with the interaction of creatures and Creator.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">This picture of reality appears most clearly in&nbsp;<em>Jubilate Agno</em>&nbsp;(“Rejoice in the Lamb”), the incomplete poetry manuscript he wrote between 1759 and 1763, during his confinement by his in-laws in insane asylums. Not brought to light till the 20th century, the poem was finally published in 1939 and reordered in 1954 and 1980 editions.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph"><em>Jubilate Agno</em>&nbsp;consists of four fragments, totaling well over a thousand lines, nearly all of them beginning with the words&nbsp;<em>Let</em>&nbsp;or&nbsp;<em>For</em>. The generally accepted scholarly reading is that Smart intended the poem as antiphonal, the&nbsp;<em>Let</em>&nbsp;verses and&nbsp;<em>For</em>&nbsp;verses meant to be read responsively,&nbsp;<em>Let X</em>&nbsp;/&nbsp;<em>For Y</em>, the way a psalm alternates two voices in worship. The Jeoffry passage is all&nbsp;<em>For</em>&nbsp;lines, because it’s from the side of response (although we lack certainty about the corresponding&nbsp;<em>Let</em>&nbsp;lines). In other words, Smart isn’t just writing free-associative madness. He’s also doing liturgy — the cat’s every motion set into a structure of praise and response, a “duly and daily serving him” devotional order. Jeoffry’s catness is his worship.</p>
<cite>Joseph Bottum, <a href="https://poemsancientandmodern.substack.com/p/todays-poem-my-cat-jeoffry-422" target="_blank" rel="noopener">Today’s Poem: My Cat Jeoffry</a></cite></blockquote>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Today I thought I’d look at a rather charming and apparently one-off verse diary entry for June 21st 1628. It’s by Thomas Crossfield (or Crosfield, 1602-1663), who was a fellow at the time at Queen’s College Oxford, and it appears in his otherwise prose diary which is still in the Queen’s College archive. Crosfield was only in his mid-20s when he wrote this entry and the lifestyle he describes, though strongly structured by religious practice, is not that far removed from the life of an advanced graduate student or postdoctoral fellow today, if they happen to be doing quite a lot of teaching. His day is taken up mainly with teaching and his own reading [&#8230;]</p>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">All this performed as before I said:<br>There other bookes by chance before me laid<br>And two of them I tooke into my hand<br>The first was Withers poëme, which our land<br>doth wondrous well describe in Cantoes eight<br>with many passages of iniury &amp; right.</p>
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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">This is George Wither’s&nbsp;<em>Britains’s Remembrancer</em>, published only in 1628 — so hot off the press. The poem is a long and in part heavily allegorized account of Wither’s experience during the plague in 1625, its spiritual significance, and a prophecy of the judgement to fall upon the nation. It is also written in rhyming couplets and though to modern taste it seems rather wordy and extravagant, in the second canto Wither makes a point of stressing and defending the straightforwardness of his style in defiance of literary fashion:</p>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">It is the usefull matter of my Rimes<br>Shall make them live. Words alter as the Times:<br>And soonest their fantastique Rhetoriques,<br>Who trim their&nbsp;<em>Poesies</em>&nbsp;with schooleboy-tricks.<br>That, which this age affects, as grave, and wise,<br>The following generation may despise.</p>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Let no man therefore dreame, I will bestow<br>My precious Time in what will vary so;<br>Since that, which, with most ease I shall produce,<br>May have (for aught I know) the longest use.</p>
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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Wither’s points here is that trendy words and styles make you sound up-to-the-minute in literary circles, but quickly go out of fashion, leaving the purchase of your message blunted. If the point of your poem is to convey a message, it is better to be unfashionably plain. His ‘fantastique Reader’ is perhaps intended to recall Donne’s ‘Giddy fantastic poets of each land’ (from Donne’s first satire).</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Crosfield’s summary of Wither’s (very long) poem — he surely didn’t read it all that afternoon — focuses upon its political and religious aspects, but it’s hard not to suspect that the urgency and immediacy of its style has something to do with Crosfield’s apparently unprecedented attempt to describe his own ordinary day in straightforward English verse.</p>
<cite>Victoria Moul, <a href="https://vamoul.substack.com/p/my-whole-ephemeris-a-diary-entry" target="_blank" rel="noopener">My whole Ephemeris: a diary entry in verse from 1628</a></cite></blockquote>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">“The floor-to-ceiling bookcase hoarding one wall / Filled with forty-year-old literary journals / Holds its breath.” The subject of the sentence, the bookcase, shows up in line 8 and the corresponding action, “holds its breath” finally appears in line 10, right before that hard break I mentioned earlier. This poem is working hard to be Poetic.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">The second half of the poem is two sentences and the I of the poem appears early. They’re standing in front of this wall-length bookcase, and it must be a hell of a wall to hold all these journals.</p>



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The dust spouts again the words of poets
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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">That’s a lot of contributor’s copies and a lot of poems published and a lot of dust. I’ll only speak for myself here but I suspect most of them don’t get read much after they get put on the shelf. I’ve had the experience of pulling one down to check something and then realize, when looking at the table of contents, that I’d been published alongside someone I met later in life.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">But here’s where the poem turns, and in a way, I think it hits at the darker side of how some poets look at ourselves and others.</p>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">I take it back; it’s not about how poets look at ourselves and others. It’s about how we fear we’ll be viewed once we’re gone. It reminds me in a way of a poem by Miller Williams from&nbsp;<em>The Ways We Touch</em>&nbsp;titled “A Note to the English Poets of the Seventeeth Century” which talks to critics and scholars who decide who gets to be anthologized and by extension, remembered by future readers, and acknowledges in the end that it’s really himself he’s talking about.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">What I find most interesting about the way Waters hits this note is the coldness of both nobody and name, the complete erasure of any humanity there. The person down the decades isn’t opening the book to discover something new or beautiful or challenging. They’re reducing the work to whether the name of the contributor is one that lasted for whatever reason. There’s no indication that the person is excited about the name they recognize. That they recognize the name seems to be the point, even while their finger drags down the page toward the grave.</p>
<cite>Brian Spears, <a href="https://brianspears.substack.com/p/nobodys-poem-by-michael-waters" target="_blank" rel="noopener">“Nobody’s Poem” by Michael Waters</a></cite></blockquote>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph"><a href="https://cascadiapoeticslab.org/living-room/jeremy-springsteed/" target="_blank" rel="noopener">Jeremy Springsteed</a>&nbsp;is a barista and occasional activist living in Seattle. He was one of the founders of the Breadline Performance Series and a member of the ReDrum poetry collective. His work has been published in many places online and in print such as&nbsp;<em>SPREAD</em>,&nbsp;<em>Pidgeonholes</em>,&nbsp;<em>Underwood</em>,&nbsp;<em>Pageboy</em>,&nbsp;<em>Internet Void</em>,&nbsp;<em>Another New Calligraphy</em>, and&nbsp;<em>Limanal Spaces</em>. He is the author of four collections of poetry:&nbsp;<em><a href="https://www.amazon.com/Guide-Getting-Lost-Jeremy-Springsteed/dp/8182539412" target="_blank" rel="noopener">A Guide To Getting Lost.</a>&nbsp;</em>(Cyberwit 2022)&nbsp;<a href="https://www.amazon.ca/Weasel-Corpse-Other-Jeremy-Springsteed/dp/8196202687" target="_blank" rel="noopener"><em>Salt, Weasel, Corpse, and Other</em>.</a>&nbsp;(Cyberwit 2023)&nbsp;<em><a href="https://www.amazon.sg/Beneath-Ashes-My-Grandfather-Youth/dp/936354186X" target="_blank" rel="noopener">Beneath The Ashes of My Grandfather and My Youth.&nbsp;</a></em>(Cyberwit 2025)<em>&nbsp;<a href="https://www.carbonationpress.com/catalog-2/016-foot" target="_blank" rel="noopener">By Wing and Foot.</a>&nbsp;</em>(Carbonation Press 2025)</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph"><strong>1 &#8211; How did your first book change your life? How does your most recent work compare to your previous? How does it feel different?</strong></p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">My first book felt like a validation of all the years I had spent working on my craft. All the readings I had organized or taken part in. All the rejections. It alleviated the imposter syndrome.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">The first collection was more like a greatest hits than a thematic grouping of poems. As I produced new work I thought of it in a more contingent light. When writing work for this latest collection I would look at those oddball one off poems and find the correct home in the larger body.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">While I have always had my themes and return points, my process recently has been looking towards enriching connections in tone and subject.&nbsp;</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph"><strong>2 &#8211; How did you come to poetry first, as opposed to, say, fiction or non-fiction?</strong></p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">I had always wanted to be a writer, not necessarily a poet though. I have a very vivid memory from when I was 13, my depression had really set in the year before and I was doing pretty poorly in school. I was talking with my mom in her bedroom and she was trying to figure out what was going on with me. I was crying, “I just want to write and I don’t even know what that means.”</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">We were a paycheck to paycheck working class family. I had, as far as I knew, never met any kind of an artist and I had no idea how one became such a thing.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">I would work on my silly little stories instead of paying attention to my classes. Stories like– Hitler secretly surviving and taking over a small US midwest town or stories of me being a secret agent with a large base under my parents&#8217; rented house.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">I would keep falling deeper into depression. I started playing sports to try to fit in with the other boys. Eventually I destroyed my knees and my mental health.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">I was having mild auditory hallucinations. I began writing them down, then I began altering them. Eventually I didn’t hear them but they were still in my head.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">I took creative writing and was lucky to have a fantastic teacher named Joel Long who introduced me to a larger world of poetry. Joel brought big name poets into the classroom, (the poet laureate at the time <a href="https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poets/jorie-graham" target="_blank" rel="noopener">Jorie Graham</a>, <a href="https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poets/louise-gluck" target="_blank" rel="noopener">Louise Glück</a>, etc.)  which was no small feat for our suburban Utah high school. I was introduced to many local poets. He gave me a structure to use. I have never looked back. [&#8230;]</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph"><strong>5 &#8211; Are public readings part of or counter to your creative process? Are you the sort of writer who enjoys doing readings?</strong></p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Readings have been an important part of my formation as a poet. Hearing when a line cuts through people, or when it just lies face down on the floor. Receiving immediate feedback and interpretations of a new poem is powerful and valuable.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">I have been the open mic MC for a few reading series. I would always start the open mic with a new poem which kept me writing. It also put me in close contact with all manner of writers from a diverse skill set. Writing is solitary work so any opportunity to be in community with other writers is to be relished.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">I am also a founding member of the ReDrum poetry collective with my dear friend Alex Bleecker. Our troop has been involved in both publishing work and performative work. The performances are always occasional and based on a singular theme (whales, Carlo Zinelli, time travel, etc.)&nbsp;&nbsp;that the 2-4 poets work towards separately and as a group. Those performances have allowed new ways of looking at what a poem might be.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">My first book wouldn’t have been possible without public readings. It helped me to group poems so the flow of the work was more natural. They let me know what was working and what I should focus my energy on.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Then there is the theft. There is no better teacher than hearing someone read a poem that you wish you had written and trying to figure out how you might be able to still write that poem but make it yours.</p>
<cite>rob mclennan, <a href="http://robmclennan.blogspot.com/2026/09/12-or-20-second-series-questions-with_01155645528.html" target="_blank" rel="noopener">12 or 20 (second series) questions with Jeremy Springsteed</a></cite></blockquote>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">I read haphazardly, dipping in and out of poets and collections. Some of these I’ve recently picked up while looking out new reads for the dissertation, some I read for The Poetry Book Club, and some I am coming back to again and again.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">I haven’t read them all cover to cover. Mostly, I’ve dipped in and out, read sections or several at a time. But in all of them I’ve found things that astounded me and that I love, whether that’s attention to detail, careful wording, unexpected use of images, interesting line breaks, masterful use of form, lyrical style, or wonderful inventiveness.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Read cover to cover more than once are: <em>Hannah Copley’s</em> <em>‘Lapwing’</em>, <em>Victoria Chang’s</em> <em>‘With my back to the world’</em>, and <em>Yanita Georgieva’s</em> ‘<em>Small Undetectable Thefts’</em>.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">The collection that most recently absolutely blew me away: <em>Tishani Doshi’s</em> <em>‘A God At The Door’</em>.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Do with those pieces of information what you will.</p>
<cite>Rachael Hill, <a href="https://poetnotes.substack.com/p/some-poets-ive-been-loving" target="_blank" rel="noopener">Some poets I’ve been loving</a></cite></blockquote>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">My first encounter with Paula Rego was accidental. On a trip to Lisbon almost thirty years ago I visited the Gulbenkian Museum and happened upon a major exhibition. It was the first time I’d seen her work, and it changed me. I last saw her paintings at a retrospective at the Tate Britain just before she died. I left the exhibition refreshed and optimistic – I’d hazard to say even inspired – about the trajectory of women’s rights. Perhaps we might yet pull out of our current nosedive into the most misogynistic cultural period I’ve witnessed in my lifetime?</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Whenever I look at a Rego, I see an artist whose project was to put women’s subjectivity at the centre of an exploration of power, status, history and the family. Plath, Szymborska and Akhmatova are perhaps her poet-analogues. I agree with Germaine Greer’s take on Rego: “It is not often given to women to recognise themselves in painting. Still less to see their private world, their dreams, the insides of their heads, projected on such a scale and so immodestly.” [&#8230;]</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">In <em><a href="https://artuk.org/discover/artworks/the-artist-in-her-studio-37560" target="_blank" rel="noopener">The Artist in Her Studio</a> </em>(1993), a woman sits centre stage surrounded by a cornucopia of props and symbols: mythological creatures, statues, animals, art, models, sinister looking vegetables with their connotations of fruition, harvest, impending decomposition. Her inner world is complex, fantastical and populated by women and girls. At the centre, the artist, who is simultaneously being painted by a child-version of herself, squarely faces us, legs apart in the pose of a middle-aged male farmer at rest, elbow on the table. She is smoking a pipe and gazing heavenward, lost in thought. My heart leapt when I first found myself in front of this piece. I’m a fortunate middle-aged woman who has viewed thousands of paintings, but it‘s still rare I find myself standing before a vision of female subjectivity as complex and contradictory as that so long available to men.</p>
<cite>Lisa Brockwell, <a href="https://northseapoets.substack.com/p/the-private-worlds-of-women" target="_blank" rel="noopener">The Private Worlds of Women</a></cite></blockquote>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">I am zooming out<br>and out.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Life is pixelating,<br>nothing but tiny squares.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Here, suspended in air,<br>a bridge I must<br>have built myself.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">I have been here before.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">These are things<br>I have done before.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">I am learning<br>to trace my hand<br>to grip<br>the fat purple crayon.</p>
<cite>Rebecca Cook, <a href="https://rebeccacook13.substack.com/p/the-orange-ribbons-of-autumn" target="_blank" rel="noopener">The Orange Ribbons of Autumn</a></cite></blockquote>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">When I step outside the synagogue now, or onto my own deck, I hear the chirring of crickets and other late summer singers. I can’t help anthropomorphizing them:&nbsp;<em>our days are short, let us sing while we can!</em></p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Of course, that’s the subtext of every Yom Kippur, too. Our days are short: let us sing while we can, and make teshuvah while we can, and change our lives while we can, because we never know how much time we’ll get.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Tonight we’ll make the last havdalah of the old year, and then we’ll sing several of the&nbsp;<em>piyyutim</em>&nbsp;(prayer-songs) of the high holidays for the first time since last Yom Kippur. A spiritual stitch in time between then and now.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Where did the year go? There was some illness. There was winter. Didn’t I&nbsp;<a href="https://velveteenrabbi.com/2026/04/12/we-made-it/" target="_blank" rel="noopener">just thrill to the spring song of the tree frogs</a>&nbsp;in the wetland? And now suddenly I hear the song that means summer is slipping away.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">No matter how many times I walk the labyrinth of the seasons I’m surprised when I reach the point where we turn. “<a href="https://www.poetry-chaikhana.com/Poets/O/OliverMary/FiveAMinthe/index.html" target="_blank" rel="noopener">So this is how</a>&nbsp;you swim inward, so this is how you flow outward, so this is how you pray.”</p>
<cite>Rachel Barenblat, <a href="https://velveteenrabbi.com/2026/09/05/so-this-is-how/" target="_blank" rel="noopener">So this is how.</a></cite></blockquote>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph"><em><strong>The Lesser Palaces</strong></em><br><em>After Abdullah Hany Daher</em><br><br>a house burns in the flames<br>and again in the eyes <br>of those who loved it<br>and again when we <br>enter and go out <br>the front door <br>of the world </p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Very excited that my new novel is launching out in the world. I’m doing quite a few events but the launches are in Hamilton and Toronto. Also (below) my daughter and I made a trailer in the local cemetery. [&#8230;]</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Also, I’m doing a series of what I’m thinking of as mystic comics using various impossible shapes and clouds.</p>
<cite>Gary Barwin, <a href="https://garybarwin.substack.com/p/the-comedians-book-of-the-dead-poetry" target="_blank" rel="noopener">The Comedian’s Book of the Dead + poetry motivational poster</a></cite></blockquote>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">In 2019 I took ‘My Name Is Swan’ to New York. The only way to arrive in New York is by stream ship, preferably in the 19th century with a single suitcase containing an unfinished manuscript, a bottle of potato brandy and second-hand suit gifted by a consumptive relative.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">I paid my passage on the QM2 from Southampton, Swan stowed away and sailed for free. My agent at the time instructed me that I had a week at sea to find myself a rich patron. I saw it as a week looking out at the unabridged nothingness, at the intact emptiness, at the whole unbroken poem of the Atlantic Ocean.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">I did take the opportunity to introduce my stowaway to those who’d not give up his secrets and this included the ship’s entertainment officer. The QM2 boasts one of the largest floating libraries in the world containing around 10,000 titles. They also host literary festivals and employ the Royal Court to put on Shakespeare plays. I thought passengers and crew should be treated to a reading of ‘My Name Is Swan’.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">After a few days gently badgering the entertainment officer, name dropping and persuading him of my poetic pedigree, he eventually gave me a teatime slot in the Queen’s Ballroom. A storm blew up the afternoon I was due to read and we’d not long passed the chart position where the Titanic had struck an iceberg. The conditions were perfect. The ship pitched and listed as I stood in the middle of the dance floor and gave my reading. The tea-cup classes tried to maintain their dignity while navigating finger sandwiches and miniature scones in a force eight gale as both ship and poetry rolled around the ocean.</p>
<cite>Jan Noble, <a href="https://jannoble.substack.com/p/n80-all-at-sea-with-swan" target="_blank" rel="noopener">Nº80 All at sea with Swan&#8230;</a></cite></blockquote>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">We find ourselves in September and the light is already dwindling earlier each night. This weekend brough the final writing mini-retreat of the summer, this time up in Wisconsin along the lake. I was able to get polished drafts on both the Indiana hotel play and the train station / time travel project I&#8217;ve been working on, as well as two more scenes in the play about emails from the dead. [&#8230;]</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Since I cheated on poetry all spring and summer with writing all these plays, there is still the next Greek project to dig in on, as well as some other play ideas that feel really sparkly right now, including one set the night Mary Shelley wrote&nbsp;<em>Frankenstein.&nbsp;</em>I also need to eventually turn an eye to the next full-length book project, which is more than 3/4 of the way finished. I do already have a working title I will share closer to the end of the year as it takes shape over the next few months.&nbsp;</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Otherwise, it&#8217;s a lot of galleys and edits on the first few chaps of the dgp season, and reading more submissions as I go.</p>
<cite>Kristy Bowen, <a href="http://kristybowen.blogspot.com/2026/09/notes-things-972026.html" target="_blank" rel="noopener">notes &amp; things | 9/7/2026</a></cite></blockquote>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Three years ago I decided to get up and sniff the air each Monday morning. I also decided to write a blog. The reason? A pivot. A very large one where I decided to step out of my thirty-year career and see what came next for me.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">And the first blogs were rather short, but I was starting, and it was getting me up early for myself instead of early for travelling to work. I love watching the day unfold. I love sunrise and the peacefulness of a day when things are just beginning. When the kettle’s on for the first cup of tea and the air is relatively free of fumes there’s a freshness and a sense of another new beginning to be grateful for. I wanted to make the most of these moments, and I also wanted to set something down in a similar way to my three years of early morning driving to work tweets that had kept me sane and noticing after covid. I needed one stable thing to mark each new week, and that was standing outside each Monday morning and breathing deeply.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Doing something regularly has a beautiful familiarity to it which marks time rather than letting it slip by. And because I am someone who, as my sister puts it, is either climbing a mountain or not sure I want to go for a walk, I like the fact that this habit has stuck. The writer in me likes writing and it feels good to me to mark a new week.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">One of my poems has been published in <em>Molecules Unlimited Poetry Journal: Issue 1,</em> and I am glad that Stephen Paul Wren chose to include it in this anthology. Poems submitted for consideration were on the theme of the heart and this theme reminded me of a maths activity I used to enjoy working on with the children where we compared the heart rate per minute of different mammals. This poem was written in response to the call out for submissions and started with me remembering this lesson and seeing where I could find a poem within that thought. It felt cathartic to set down the words. It also seems apt because this time three years ago when I was starting this blog, I was also starting to focus on reading my poetry out loud to more people and that came with a whole range of thoughts and feelings that the newly training coach in me wanted to explore.</p>
<cite>Sue Finch, <a href="https://suefinch.co.uk/2026/09/07/just-start-and-keep-going/" target="_blank" rel="noopener">JUST START AND KEEP GOING</a></cite></blockquote>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Moths keep interrogating the porch light—<br>so many small insistences, against the stance<br>of something that won&#8217;t budge. The trash<br>bins wait to be returned to the corner<br>of the yard beside the browning hydrangeas,<br>their mouths agape. I shut them close, then go<br>inside and wash my hands. But dark does not yet fall<br>like an anvil or a heavy curtain. Sometimes, just as it&#8217;s<br>about to flood the threshold, a small rift opens.<br>And then a chorus of frogs, a choir of crickets.</p>
<cite>Luisa A. Igloria, <a href="https://www.vianegativa.us/2026/09/darkness/" target="_blank" rel="noopener">Darkness</a></cite></blockquote>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">This summer brought me some good writing time. In May, I went on my university’s faculty writing retreat and spent several days at Mission San Luis Rey. I finalized a new full-length manuscript, drafted some new poems, read a book, and enjoyed meals and giggling over evening games of Ransom Notes with colleague friends.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">I continued hosting Writers Gonna Write, a monthly 3-hour co-writing session on Zoom for PLNU alumni, current students, and faculty. It’s amazing how much we all get done in those 3 hours! I’m so thankful for the folks who show up and do this with me, including the regulars who have shown up since this began 6 years ago!</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">In July, I got to be on faculty again for the Glen Workshop as the writing retreat guide. The Glen was held in San Diego for the first time, and USD was a great venue for it. We’ll be there again next year. I wasn’t sure how it would go for me to do this in my city, but it was wonderful to get to share The Glen with local friends and to share San Diego with my Glen friends. I got a lot of good writing time alongside my retreat crew too.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">In August, I got to read on the main stage at the KPBS Book Festival alongside Blas Falconer, Ana Carrete, and Michael Klam, who are all fantastic. I read a few poems from&nbsp;<em>Tasty Other</em>&nbsp;in honor of its upcoming 10-year anniversary (what?!), and I especially loved getting to share the day with my 11-year-old.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">And this week, my new semester began! I have a lighter teaching load because I received a fellowship to work on a writing project, and I’ve already been making some good use of that time this week. Happy fall writing to us all!</p>
<cite>Katie Manning, <a href="https://www.katiemanningpoet.com/2026/09/03/summer-writing-had-me-a-blast/" target="_blank" rel="noopener">Summer Writing, Had Me a Blast</a></cite></blockquote>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">“Ebb tide; I smoke in the darkness and inhale rank seaweed.”</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">— Joseph Brodsky, “Brise Marine”</p>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Odd how a single word invokes an image, dragging memories into footprints over a beach behind it.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">The verb form of “invoke” comes from the late 14th-century Latin<em>&nbsp;invocare</em>, meaning “to call upon, appeal to.” It slithered into English through the Old French verb&nbsp;<em>envoquer,</em>&nbsp;meaning “to summon, implore, or appeal to a higher authority, law, or deity.”</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Ebb tide aside, I woke from a dream with Hannah Höch’s seaweed laying across my eyes. [&#8230;]</p>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">As for the seaweed, some say you can read the stories your mother never told you in the shapes and figures that eveningtide brings to a beach. This is why people are drawn to the shoreline at sunset, their electrified bodies moving across the sand like the hands of a god who has forgotten how to read his own letters.</p>
<cite>Alina Stefanescu, <a href="https://alinastefanescu.substack.com/p/what-seaweed-brings-up" target="_blank" rel="noopener">What seaweed brings up.</a></cite></blockquote>



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<p class="wp-block-paragraph">I live in Saint Paul, Minnesota, within easy busing distance of the State Fairgrounds, and within earshot of the nightly fireworks. Whether or not I attend, the fair is a dependable marker of the end of summer, for me and thousands of others.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">I’m fairly confident that my poem “State Fair Fireworks, Labor Day” is reproduced online in more places than any other poem of mine. And by the grace of the late lamented series&nbsp;<em>American Life in Poetry</em>, it’s been seen widely offline, too, since it ran some years ago in the many newspapers that carried that feature. Though many Substack readers will already know the poem, I hope there are some of you for whom it’s new.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">I’m conscious that it’s an enormous privilege to be able to enjoy such a normal, seasonal ritual: to take an untroubled day of entertainment and to ride buses and to walk home in lighted streets in a calm city, contemplating the changing season.</p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">May the world soon be restored to that sort of calm. </p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph"><strong>State Fair Fireworks, Labor Day</strong></p>



<p class="wp-block-paragraph">Look up: blazing chrysanthemums in rose<br>shriek into bloom above the Tilt-a-Whirls,<br>hang for a blink, then die in smoky swirls.<br>They scream revolt at what the body knows:<br>all revels end. We clap and sigh. Then, no—<br>another rose! another peony! break,<br>flame, roar, as though by roaring they might make<br>the rides whirl in perpetuum. As though<br>we need not finally, wearily turn, to plow<br>back through the crush of bodies, the lank air,<br>to buses that inch us, sweating, across town.<br>As though we were not dropped in silence there<br>to trudge the last blocks home, the streetlamps low,<br>the crickets counting summer’s seconds down.</p>
<cite>Maryann Corbett, <a href="https://maryanncorbett.substack.com/p/a-ritual" target="_blank" rel="noopener">A Ritual</a></cite></blockquote>



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money is no lung 
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										<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><span style="color: #dddddd;">Up pretty betimes, and awhile to my vyall, and then abroad to several places, to buy things for the furnishing my house and my wife’s closet, and then met my uncle Thomas, by appointment, and he and I to the Prerogative Office in Paternoster Row, and there searched and found my uncle Day’s will, end read it over and advised upon it, and his wife’s after him, and though my aunt Perkins testimony is very good, yet I fear the estate being great, and the rest that are able to inform us in the matter are all <span style="color: #000000;">possessed</span> of more or less of the estate, it will be hard for us ever to do anything, nor will I adventure anything till I see what part will be given to us <span style="color: #000000;">by</span> my uncle Thomas of all that is gained. But I had another end of putting my uncle into some doubt, that so I might keep him: yet from going into the country that he may be there against the Court at his own charge, and so I left him and his son at a loss what to do till I see them again. And so I to my Lord Crew’s, thinking to have dined there, but it was too late, and so back and called at my brother’s and Mr. Holden’s about several businesses, <span style="color: #000000;">an</span>d went all alone to the Black Spread <span style="color: #000000;">Eagle</span> in Bride Lane, and there had a chopp of veale and some bread, cheese, and beer, cost me a shilling to my dinner, and so through Fleet Ally, God forgive me, out of an itch to look upon the sluts there, against which when I saw them my stomach turned, and so to Bartholomew Fayre, where I met with Mr. Pickering, and he and I to see the monkeys at the Dutch house, which is far beyond the other that my wife and I saw the other day; and thence to see the dancing on the ropes, which was very poor and tedious.</span><br />
<span style="color: #dddddd;">But he and I fell in discourse about my Lord Sandwich. He tells me how he is sorry for my Lord at his being at Chelsey, and that his but seeming so to my Lord without speaking one word, had put him clear out of my Lord’s favour, so as that he was fain to leave him before he went into <span style="color: #000000;">the</span> country, for that he was put to eat with his servants; but I could not <span style="color: #000000;">fish</span> from him, though I knew it, what was the matter; but am very sorry to see that my Lord hath thus much forgot h<span style="color: #000000;">is</span> honour, but am resolved not to meddle with it.</span><br />
<span style="color: #dddddd;">The play being done, I stole from him and hied home, buying several things at the ironmonger’s — dogs, tongs, and shovels — for my wife’s closett and the rest of my house, and so home, and thence to my office awhile, and so home to supper and to bed. By my letters from Tangier today I hear that it grows very <span style="color: #000000;">strong</span> by land, <span style="color: #000000;">and</span> the Mole <span style="color: #000000;">goes on</span>. They have lately killed two hundred of the Moores, and lost about forty or fifty. I am mightily afeard of laying out too much <span style="color: #000000;">money</span> in goods upon my house, but it <span style="color: #000000;">is no</span>t money f<span style="color: #000000;">lung</span> away, though <span style="color: #000000;">I</span> reckon nothing money but when it is in the <span style="color: #000000;">bank</span>, till I have a good sum beforehand <span style="color: #000000;">in the world</span>.</span></p>
<p>possessed by an eagle<br />
far beyond the sand</p>
<p>the fish is strong<br />
and goes on</p>
<p>money is no lung<br />
I bank in the world</p>
<p><em><br />
Erasure poem derived from The Diary of Samuel Pepys, <a href="http://www.pepysdiary.com/diary/1663/09/07/" rel="nofollow">Monday 7 September 1663</a>.</em></p>
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		<title>Sublimation</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 06 Sep 2026 12:03:48 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I work and sweat to get 
away the itch 

I am who I fear 
in my closet at night]]></description>
										<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><span style="color: #dddddd;">(Lord’s day). My pill I took last n<span style="color: #000000;">i</span>ght <span style="color: #000000;">work</span>ed very well, <span style="color: #000000;">and</span> I lay long in bed and <span style="color: #000000;">sweat to get away the itch</span>ing all about my body from head to foot, which is beginning again as it did the last winter, and I find after <span style="color: #000000;">I am</span> up that it is abated. I staid at home all day and my wife also, <span style="color: #000000;">who</span>m, God forgive me, <span style="color: #000000;">I</span> staid along with me for <span style="color: #000000;">fear</span> of her seeing of Pembleton. But she and I entertained one another all day long with great pleasure, contriv<span style="color: #000000;">in</span>g about <span style="color: #000000;">my</span> wife’s <span style="color: #000000;">closet</span> and the bedchamber, whither we intend to go up she and I to-day.</span><br />
<span style="color: #dddddd;">We dined alone and supped also <span style="color: #000000;">at night</span>, my brother John with us, and so to prayers and to bed.</span></p>
<p>I work and sweat to get<br />
away the itch</p>
<p>I am who I fear<br />
in my closet at night</p>
<p><em><br />
Erasure poem derived from The Diary of Samuel Pepys, <a href="http://www.pepysdiary.com/diary/1663/09/06/" rel="nofollow">Sunday 6 September 1663</a>.</em></p>
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		<title>Last place</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 05 Sep 2026 23:05:40 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[busy in all 
the hells of self 

we try the last place 
unreal as a little pill 

that shore 
sea again]]></description>
										<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><span style="color: #dddddd;">Up betimes and to my viall awhile, and so to the office, and there sat, and <span style="color: #000000;">busy</span> all the morning. So at noon to the Exchange, and so home to d<span style="color: #000000;">in</span>ner, where I met Creed, who dined with me, and after dinner mightily importuned by Captain Hicks, who came to tell my wife the names and story of <span style="color: #000000;">all the</span> s<span style="color: #000000;">hells</span>, which was a pretty present he made her the other day.</span><br />
<span style="color: #dddddd;">He being gone, Creed, my wife, and I to Cornhill, and after many tryalls bought my wife a chintz, that is, a painted Indian calico, for to line her new study, which is very pretty.</span><br />
<span style="color: #dddddd;">So home with her, and then I away (Creed being gone) to Captain Minors upon Tower Hill, and there, abating only some impertinence <span style="color: #000000;">of</span> his, I did inform my<span style="color: #000000;">self we</span>ll in things relating to the East Indys; both of the coun<span style="color: #000000;">try</span> and the disappointment the King met with <span style="color: #000000;">the last</span> voyage, by the knavery of the Portugall Viceroy, and the inconsiderablenesse of the <span style="color: #000000;">place</span> of Bombaim, if we had had it. But, above all things, it seems strange to me that matters should not be understood before they went out; and also that such a thing as this, which was expected to be one of the best parts of the Queen’s portion, should not be better <span style="color: #000000;">un</span>derstood; it being, if we had it, but a poor place, and not <span style="color: #000000;">real</span>ly so as w<span style="color: #000000;">as</span> described to our King in the draught of it, but <span style="color: #000000;">a</span> poor <span style="color: #000000;">little</span> island; whereas they made the King and Lord Chancellor, and other learned men about the King, believe that that, and other islands which are near it, were all one piece; and so the draught was drawn and presented to the King, and believed by the King and expected to prove so when our men came thither; but it is quite otherwise.</span><br />
<span style="color: #dddddd;">Thence to my office, and after several letters writ, home to supper and to bed, and took a <span style="color: #000000;">pill</span>. I hear this day <span style="color: #000000;">that</span> Sir W. Batten was fain to put a<span style="color: #000000;">shore</span> at Queenborough with my Lady, who has been so sick she swears never to go to <span style="color: #000000;">sea again</span>. But it happens well that Holmes is come home into the Downes, where he will meet my Lady, and it may be do her more good than she looked for. He brings news of the peace between Tangier and the Moors, but the particulars I know not. He is come but yesterday.</span></p>
<p>busy in all<br />
the hells of self</p>
<p>we try the last place<br />
unreal as a little pill</p>
<p>that shore<br />
sea again</p>
<p><em><br />
Erasure poem derived from The Diary of Samuel Pepys, <a href="http://www.pepysdiary.com/diary/1663/09/05/" rel="nofollow">Saturday 5 September 1663</a>.</em></p>
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		<title>Friluftsliv</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 05 Sep 2026 01:42:48 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[if we consider how to live 
I like looking at a lock 

exact and satisfied 
with any cellar 

so fine a contrivance 
for a room in the world 

but how to go without 
the light dancing on dirt 

or a horse of the sea 
rocking in a gaudy bed]]></description>
										<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><span style="color: #dddddd;">Up betimes, and an hour at my viall, and then abroad by water to White Hall and Westminster Hall, and there bought the first newes-books of L’Estrange’s writing; he beginning this week; and makes, methinks, but a simple beginning. Then to speak to Mrs. Lane, who seems desirous to have me come to see her and to have her company as I had a little while ago, which methinks <span style="color: #000000;">i</span></span>f<span style="color: #dddddd;"> she <span style="color: #000000;">we</span>re very modest, <span style="color: #000000;">consider</span>ing <span style="color: #000000;">how</span> I tumbled her and tost her, she should not.</span><br />
<span style="color: #dddddd;">Thence to Mrs. Harper, and sent for Creed, and there Mrs. Harper sent for a maid for me to come <span style="color: #000000;">to live</span> with my wife. <span style="color: #000000;">I like</span> the maid’s looks well enough, and I believe may do well, she <span style="color: #000000;">looking</span> very modestly and speaking so too. I directed her to speak with my wife, and so Creed and I away to Mr. Povy’s, and he not being <span style="color: #000000;">at</span> home, walked to Lincoln’s Inn walks, which they are making very fine, and <span style="color: #000000;">a</span>bout one o’c<span style="color: #000000;">lock</span> went back to Povy’s; and by and by in comes he, and so we sat and down to dinner, and his lady, whom I never saw before (a handsome old woman that brought him money that makes him do as he does), and so we had plenty of meat and drink, though I drunk no wine, though mightily urged to it, and in the <span style="color: #000000;">exact</span> manner that I never saw in my life any where, and he the most full <span style="color: #000000;">and satisfied</span> in it that man can be in this world <span style="color: #000000;">with any</span> thing.</span><br />
<span style="color: #dddddd;">After dinner done, to see his new <span style="color: #000000;">cellar</span>s, which he has made <span style="color: #000000;">so fine</span> with so noble an arch <span style="color: #000000;">a</span>nd such<span style="color: #000000;"> contrivance</span>s <span style="color: #000000;">for</span> his barrels and bottles, and in <span style="color: #000000;">a room</span> next to it such a grotto and fountayne, which in summer will be so pleasant as nothing <span style="color: #000000;">in the world</span> can be almost.</span><br />
<span style="color: #dddddd;"><span style="color: #000000;">But</span> to see <span style="color: #000000;">how</span> he himself do pride himself too much in it, and command and expect to have all admiration, though indeed everything do highly deserve it, is a little troublesome.</span><br />
<span style="color: #dddddd;">Thence Creed and I away, and by his importunity away by coach to Bartholomew Fayre, where I have no mind <span style="color: #000000;">to go without</span> my wife, and therefore rode through <span style="color: #000000;">the</span> fayre without ‘<span style="color: #000000;">light</span>ing, and away home, leaving him there; and at home made my wife get herself presently ready, and so carried her by coach to the fayre, and showed her the monkeys <span style="color: #000000;">dancing on<span style="color: #dddddd;"> the</span></span> ropes, which was strange, but such <span style="color: #000000;">dirt</span>y sp<span style="color: #000000;">or</span>t that I was not pleased with it. There was also <span style="color: #000000;">a horse</span> with hoofs like rams hornes, a goose with four feet, and a cock with three. Thence to another place, and saw some German Clocke works, the Salutation <span style="color: #000000;">of</span> the Virgin Mary, and several Scriptural stories; but above all there was at last represented <span style="color: #000000;">the sea</span>, with Neptune, Venus, mermaids, and Ayrid on a dolphin, the sea <span style="color: #000000;">rocking</span>, so well done, that had it been <span style="color: #000000;">in a gaudy</span> manner and place, and at a little distance, it had been admirable.</span><br />
<span style="color: #dddddd;">Thence home by coach with my wife, and I awhile to the office, and so to supper and to <span style="color: #000000;">bed</span>. This day I read a Proclamation for calling in and commanding every body to apprehend my Lord Bristoll.</span></p>
<p>if we consider how to live<br />
I like looking at a lock</p>
<p>exact and satisfied<br />
with any cellar</p>
<p>so fine a contrivance<br />
for a room in the world</p>
<p>but how to go without<br />
the light dancing on dirt</p>
<p>or a horse of the sea<br />
rocking in a gaudy bed</p>
<p><em><br />
Erasure poem derived from The Diary of Samuel Pepys, <a href="http://www.pepysdiary.com/diary/1663/09/04/" rel="nofollow">Friday 4 September 1663</a>.</em></p>
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		<title>Minimal</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 04 Sep 2026 14:15:48 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[green yacht 
on the water 
her pretty sail  

a word coming 
into my head 
one letter a day 

I let my little 
hand be a man 
of ink]]></description>
										<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><span style="color: #dddddd;">Up betimes, and for an hour at my viall before my people rise. Then up and to the office a while, and then to Sir W. Batten, who is going this day for pleasure down to the Downes. I eat a breakfast with them, and at my Lady’s desire with them by coach to <span style="color: #000000;">Green</span>wich, where I went aboard with them on the Charlotte <span style="color: #000000;">yacht</span>. The wind very fresh, and I believe they will be all sicke enough, besides that she is mighty troublesome <span style="color: #000000;">on the water</span>. Methinks she makes over much of <span style="color: #000000;">her</span> husband’s ward, young Mr. Griffin, as if she expected some service from him when he comes to it, being a <span style="color: #000000;">pretty</span> young boy.</span><br />
<span style="color: #dddddd;">I left them under <span style="color: #000000;">sayle</span>, and I to Deptford, and, after <span style="color: #000000;">a word</span> or two with Sir J. Minnes, walked to Redriffe and so home. In my way, it <span style="color: #000000;">coming into my head</span>, overtaking of a beggar or two on the way that looked like Gypsys, what the Gypsys 8 or 9 days ago had foretold, that somebody that day se’nnight should be with me to borrow money, but I should lend n<span style="color: #000000;">one</span>; and looking, when I came to my office, upon my journall, that my brother John had brought a <span style="color: #000000;">letter</span> th<span style="color: #000000;">a</span>t <span style="color: #000000;">day</span> from my brother Tom to borrow 20l. more of me, which had vexed me so that <span style="color: #000000;">I</span> had sent the <span style="color: #000000;">let</span>ter to <span style="color: #000000;">my</span> father into the country, to acquaint him of it, and how <span style="color: #000000;">little</span> he is before<span style="color: #000000;">hand</span> that he is still forced to borrow. But it pleased me mightily to see how, contrary to my expectations, having so lately lent him 20l., and belief that he had money by him to spare, and that after some days not thinking of it, I should look back and find what the Gypsy had told me to <span style="color: #000000;">be</span> so true.</span><br />
<span style="color: #dddddd;">After dinner at home to my office, and there till late doing business, being very well pleased with Mr. Cutler’s coming to me about some business, and among other things tells me that they value me as <span style="color: #000000;">a man of</span> business, which he accounts the best virtuoso, and I know his th<span style="color: #000000;">ink</span>ing me so, and speaking where he comes, may be of good use to me.</span><br />
<span style="color: #dddddd;">Home to supper, and to bed.</span></p>
<p>green yacht<br />
on the water<br />
her pretty sail</p>
<p>a word coming<br />
into my head<br />
one letter a day</p>
<p>I let my little<br />
hand be a man<br />
of ink</p>
<p><em><br />
Erasure poem derived from The Diary of Samuel Pepys, <a href="http://www.pepysdiary.com/diary/1663/09/03/" rel="nofollow">Thursday 3 September 1663</a>.</em></p>
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		<title>Feed</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 03 Sep 2026 23:22:15 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[appointed like a peak 
making nothing matter 

we are preserving 
the peace 

with a spoon 
not a sword 

as if all the land 
were one stomach]]></description>
										<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><span style="color: #dddddd;">Up betimes and to my office, and thence with Sir J. Minnes by coach to White Hall, where met us Sir</span><br />
<span style="color: #dddddd;">W. Batten, and there staid by the Council Chamber till the Lords called us in, being <span style="color: #000000;">appointed</span> four days ago to attend them with an account of the riott among the seamen the other day, when Sir J. Minnes did as <span style="color: #000000;">like</span> a coxcomb as ever I saw any m<span style="color: #000000;">a</span>n s<span style="color: #000000;">peak</span> in my life, and so we were dismissed, they <span style="color: #000000;">making nothing</span> almost of the <span style="color: #000000;">matter</span>. We staid long without, till by and by my Lord Mayor comes, who also was commanded to be there, and he having, <span style="color: #000000;">we</span> not being within with him, an admonition from the Lords to take better c<span style="color: #000000;">are</span> of <span style="color: #000000;">preserving the peace</span>, we joyned <span style="color: #000000;">with</span> him, and the Lords having commanded Sir J. Minnes to prosecute the fellows for the riott, we rode along with my Lord Mayor in his coach to the Sessions House in the Old Bayley, where the Sessions are now sitting. Here I heard two or three ordinary tryalls, among others one (which, they say, is very common now-a-days, and therefore in my now taking of mayds I resolve to look to have some body to answer for them) a woman that went and was indicted by four names for entering herself a cookemayde to a gentleman that prosecuted her there, and after 3 days run away with a silver tankard, a porringer of silver, and <span style="color: #000000;">a</span> couple of <span style="color: #000000;">spoon</span>s, and being now found is found guilty, and likely will be hanged.</span><br />
<span style="color: #dddddd;">By and by up to dinner with my Lord Mayor and the Aldermen, and a very great dinner and most excellent venison, but it almost made me sick by <span style="color: #000000;">not</span> daring to drink wine. After dinner into a withdrawing room; and there we talked, among other things, of the Lord M<span style="color: #000000;">a</span>yor’s <span style="color: #000000;">sword</span>. They tell me this sword, they believe, is at le<span style="color: #000000;">as</span>t a hundred or two hundred years old; and another that he hath, which is called the Black Sword, which the Lord Mayor wears when he mournes, but properly is their Lenten sword to wear upon Good Friday and other Lent days, is older than that. Thence I, leaving Sir J. Minnes to look after his indictment drawing up, I home by water, and there found my w<span style="color: #000000;">if</span>e mightily pleased with a present of shells, fine shells given her by Captain Hickes, and so she and I up and look them over, and indeed they are very pleasant ones. By and by in comes Mr. Lewellin, lately come from Ireland, to see me, and he tells me how the English interest f<span style="color: #000000;">all</span>s mightily there, the Irish party being too great, so that most of the old rebells are found innocent, and <span style="color: #000000;">the</span>ir <span style="color: #000000;">land</span>s, which <span style="color: #000000;">were</span> forfeited and bought or given to the English, are restored to them; which gives great discontent there among the English.</span><br />
<span style="color: #dddddd;">He being g<span style="color: #000000;">one</span>, I to my office, where late, putting things in order, and so home to supper and to bed. Going through the City, my Lord Mayor told me how the piller set up by Exeter House is only to show where the pipes of water run to the City; and observed that this City is as well watered as any city in the world, and that the bringing the water to the City hath cost it first and last above 300,000l.; but by the new building, and the building of St. James’s by my Lord St. Albans, which is now about (and which the City <span style="color: #000000;">stomach</span> I perceive highly, but dare not oppose it), were it now to be done, it would not be done for a million of money.</span></p>
<p>appointed like a peak<br />
making nothing matter</p>
<p>we are preserving<br />
the peace</p>
<p>with a spoon<br />
not a sword</p>
<p>as if all the land<br />
were one stomach</p>
<p><em><br />
Erasure poem derived from The Diary of Samuel Pepys, <a href="http://www.pepysdiary.com/diary/1663/09/02/" rel="nofollow">Wednesday 2 September 1663</a>.</em></p>
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		<title>Hell realm</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Dave Bonta]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 02 Sep 2026 12:20:46 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[one inanity among many 
visions of hell 

is true in the evening 
to an imprudent moth 

considering peace a lie 
considering a life elsewhere]]></description>
										<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><span style="color: #dddddd;">Up pretty betimes, and after a little at my viall to my office, where we sat all the morning, and I got my bill among others for my carved work (which I expected to have paid for myself) signed at the table, and hope to get the m<span style="color: #000000;">one</span>y back again, though if the rest had not got it paid by the King, I never <span style="color: #000000;">in</span>tended nor did desire to have him pay for my v<span style="color: #000000;">anity</span>. At noon to the Exchange, where <span style="color: #000000;">among many</span> merchants abut pro<span style="color: #000000;">visions</span> for the navy; and so home to dinner, where I met Mr. Hunt, his wife and child, and dined with us very merry. And after dinner I to my <span style="color: #000000;">of</span>fice with Captain Hickes, who brought my wife some s<span style="color: #000000;">hell</span>s, very pretty. He gives me great informacion against the officers and men at Deptford; I find him a talking fellow, but believe much of what he says <span style="color: #000000;">is true</span>.</span><br />
<span style="color: #dddddd;"><span style="color: #000000;">In the evening</span> my brother John coming <span style="color: #000000;">to</span> me to complain that my wife seems to be discontented at his being here, and shows him great disrespect; so I took and walked with him in the garden, and discoursed long with him about my affairs, <span style="color: #000000;">an</span>d how <span style="color: #000000;">imprudent</span> it is for my father and <span style="color: #000000;">moth</span>er and him to take exceptions without great cause at my wife, <span style="color: #000000;">considering</span> how much it concerns them to keep her their friend and for my <span style="color: #000000;">peace</span>; not that I would ever be led by her to forget or desert them in the main, but yet she deserves to be pleased <span style="color: #000000;">a</span>nd comp<span style="color: #000000;">lie</span>d with a little, <span style="color: #000000;">considering</span> the m<span style="color: #000000;">a</span>nner of <span style="color: #000000;">life</span> that I keep her to, and how convenient it were for me to have Brampton for her to be sent to when I have a mind or occasion to go abroad to Portsmouth or <span style="color: #000000;">elsewhere</span> about pleasure or business, when it will not be safe for me to leave her alone. So directed him how to behave himself to her, and gave him other counsel; and so to my office, where late.</span></p>
<p>one inanity among many<br />
visions of hell</p>
<p>is true in the evening<br />
to an imprudent moth</p>
<p>considering peace a lie<br />
considering a life elsewhere</p>
<p><em><br />
Erasure poem derived from The Diary of Samuel Pepys, <a href="http://www.pepysdiary.com/diary/1663/09/01/" rel="nofollow">Tuesday 1 September 1663</a>.</em></p>
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