Comments on: Painting the river

By: Dave

Dave — Sun, 03 Jun 2007 14:15:20 +0000

Thanks!

By: pauline

pauline — Sun, 03 Jun 2007 11:08:31 +0000

poetry in the way the words fit and flowed, poetry in the melding images, poetry in the ampersands –

By: Dave

Dave — Fri, 01 Jun 2007 21:40:25 +0000

Thanks for the generous reactions. I wasn’t fishing for compliments, honest!

By: Crafty Green Poet

Crafty Green Poet — Fri, 01 Jun 2007 08:02:47 +0000

Very evocative combination of photos and words, especially the staring into the water until the traffic becomes another river, I love that sense of being so lost in the moment it all becomes one. I like the little goth figure who comes in at the end too.

By: robin andrea

robin andrea — Fri, 01 Jun 2007 02:48:50 +0000

There is a place under overpasses and bridges where life has its own rhythms. It’s like a secret that only gets told at night, whispered, and then painted on the very structure itself. Pieces of poems everywhere.

By: gautami

gautami — Fri, 01 Jun 2007 02:26:15 +0000

It is poem in pictures and those beautiful words. “sheer poetry” I call it!

By: quiet regular

quiet regular — Fri, 01 Jun 2007 02:09:42 +0000

I think you did quite well.

By: angie

angie — Thu, 31 May 2007 22:56:41 +0000

Poetry? Definitely. The tar and the traffic are surprising illustrations of “river;” I like this a lot: stare into the water until the rumble of traffic turns into another river

Very nice.