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	<description>Purveyors of fine poetry since 2003.</description>
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		By: Bill		</title>
		<link>https://www.vianegativa.us/2007/10/static/#comment-6300</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Bill]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 04 Nov 2007 23:59:43 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[No, I wouldn&#039;t think.

Hm!  I gather you use steam heat.  I had you down for default central air;  noisy squirrel-cage blower -- &quot;static&quot; being the whoosh that silences birdsong: a furnace misunderstanding!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>No, I wouldn&#8217;t think.</p>
<p>Hm!  I gather you use steam heat.  I had you down for default central air;  noisy squirrel-cage blower &#8212; &#8220;static&#8221; being the whoosh that silences birdsong: a furnace misunderstanding!</p>
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		By: Dave		</title>
		<link>https://www.vianegativa.us/2007/10/static/#comment-6299</link>

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		<pubDate>Sat, 03 Nov 2007 17:40:17 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Hi Lucy - I missed your comment earlier. I think your kinglets have more intriguing common names than ours!

The verbless phrases are a good example of experimentation flowing from tiredness: I couldn&#039;t think of verbs at first, so I just wrote them like that and kept going.

Bill - Insulated ducts? Sounds like a good idea for more reasons than one. It&#039;s no fun lying in the dust and purcupine shit every few years to re-wrap all the pipes.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Lucy &#8211; I missed your comment earlier. I think your kinglets have more intriguing common names than ours!</p>
<p>The verbless phrases are a good example of experimentation flowing from tiredness: I couldn&#8217;t think of verbs at first, so I just wrote them like that and kept going.</p>
<p>Bill &#8211; Insulated ducts? Sounds like a good idea for more reasons than one. It&#8217;s no fun lying in the dust and purcupine shit every few years to re-wrap all the pipes.</p>
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		By: Bill		</title>
		<link>https://www.vianegativa.us/2007/10/static/#comment-6298</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Bill]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 03 Nov 2007 13:14:50 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[My silence loving friend
silenced his furnace
with insulated ducts]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My silence loving friend<br />
silenced his furnace<br />
with insulated ducts</p>
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		By: Lucy		</title>
		<link>https://www.vianegativa.us/2007/10/static/#comment-6297</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Lucy]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 01 Nov 2007 06:16:56 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[It&#039;s a gem; I like the way you dropped the verbs off the first three lines, and that last hanging &#039;blue&#039; note!

&#039;a silence well past the age
when it could ever get pregnant &#039;

Isn&#039;t it good to get to there?

There are also firecrests - I&#039;ve never got close enough to any I&#039;ve seen to establish whether they were gold- or firecrests, they don&#039;t stay still long.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It&#8217;s a gem; I like the way you dropped the verbs off the first three lines, and that last hanging &#8216;blue&#8217; note!</p>
<p>&#8216;a silence well past the age<br />
when it could ever get pregnant &#8216;</p>
<p>Isn&#8217;t it good to get to there?</p>
<p>There are also firecrests &#8211; I&#8217;ve never got close enough to any I&#8217;ve seen to establish whether they were gold- or firecrests, they don&#8217;t stay still long.</p>
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		By: Dave		</title>
		<link>https://www.vianegativa.us/2007/10/static/#comment-6296</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Dave]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 31 Oct 2007 11:46:56 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Thanks. Of course, one of the main reasons to work on poetry -- or anything creative -- is to experience immersion in the moment, and over time to extend the attention span.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks. Of course, one of the main reasons to work on poetry &#8212; or anything creative &#8212; is to experience immersion in the moment, and over time to extend the attention span.</p>
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		By: MB		</title>
		<link>https://www.vianegativa.us/2007/10/static/#comment-6295</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[MB]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 31 Oct 2007 02:13:45 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I like the sparky, staticky feel that is not-haiku but distant, wayward  cousin. Like mouse feet running in snatches, or quick bird-winging, or the attention span after having sat over-long in silence.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I like the sparky, staticky feel that is not-haiku but distant, wayward  cousin. Like mouse feet running in snatches, or quick bird-winging, or the attention span after having sat over-long in silence.</p>
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		By: Dave		</title>
		<link>https://www.vianegativa.us/2007/10/static/#comment-6294</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Dave]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 31 Oct 2007 01:24:41 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Thanks, Rachel.

Theriomorph - It&#039;s when they&#039;re made from insulation I wrapped around the pipes that I take particular offense. Especially when they build in the back of a bookshelf or a file drawer.

marly - Not shaped, but definitely prompted. A spill-over effect.

Tall Girl - Very small passerine. Here in the eastern U.S. there are  two species, &lt;a href=&quot;http://www.birds.cornell.edu/AllAboutBirds/BirdGuide/Ruby-crowned_Kinglet_dtl.html&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;ruby-crowned&lt;/a&gt; and golden-crowned. In Europe, there&#039;s a species of kinglet called a &lt;a href=&quot;http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Goldcrest&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;goldcrest&lt;/a&gt;.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks, Rachel.</p>
<p>Theriomorph &#8211; It&#8217;s when they&#8217;re made from insulation I wrapped around the pipes that I take particular offense. Especially when they build in the back of a bookshelf or a file drawer.</p>
<p>marly &#8211; Not shaped, but definitely prompted. A spill-over effect.</p>
<p>Tall Girl &#8211; Very small passerine. Here in the eastern U.S. there are  two species, <a href="http://www.birds.cornell.edu/AllAboutBirds/BirdGuide/Ruby-crowned_Kinglet_dtl.html" rel="nofollow">ruby-crowned</a> and golden-crowned. In Europe, there&#8217;s a species of kinglet called a <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Goldcrest" rel="nofollow">goldcrest</a>.</p>
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		By: Tall Girl		</title>
		<link>https://www.vianegativa.us/2007/10/static/#comment-6293</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Tall Girl]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 30 Oct 2007 20:45:19 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Yes, I felt a haiku-ness to this spare and evocative piece. What&#039;s a kinglet?]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yes, I felt a haiku-ness to this spare and evocative piece. What&#8217;s a kinglet?</p>
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		By: marlyat2		</title>
		<link>https://www.vianegativa.us/2007/10/static/#comment-6292</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[marlyat2]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 30 Oct 2007 15:34:05 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Ugh, bad mouse condo visions.

Think that this poem was shaped somehow by all those haiku?]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ugh, bad mouse condo visions.</p>
<p>Think that this poem was shaped somehow by all those haiku?</p>
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		By: Theriomorph		</title>
		<link>https://www.vianegativa.us/2007/10/static/#comment-6291</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Theriomorph]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 30 Oct 2007 14:31:50 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Second what Rachel said. 

Carries me, reading, exactly as I want to be carried - but with surprise.

Once found a mouse condominium complex so complex and Escher-eqsue in my gas grill in spring that I didn&#039;t grill all season for lack of heart to dismantle and burn it.

The ones in the wood stove always went, though.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Second what Rachel said. </p>
<p>Carries me, reading, exactly as I want to be carried &#8211; but with surprise.</p>
<p>Once found a mouse condominium complex so complex and Escher-eqsue in my gas grill in spring that I didn&#8217;t grill all season for lack of heart to dismantle and burn it.</p>
<p>The ones in the wood stove always went, though.</p>
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