Comments on: Decoy https://www.vianegativa.us/2008/01/decoy/ Purveyors of fine poetry since 2003. Mon, 21 Jan 2008 02:26:55 +0000 hourly 1 By: ...deb https://www.vianegativa.us/2008/01/decoy/#comment-6851 Mon, 21 Jan 2008 02:26:55 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/2008/01/16/decoy/#comment-6851 I like your take on this, a fish I remember being enthralled with when Jaques Cousteau (must have) introduced me to it, an amazing creature.

The idea that it is snappish made me smile, and wince. And read your poem over three times.

]]> By: SB https://www.vianegativa.us/2008/01/decoy/#comment-6850 Fri, 18 Jan 2008 19:15:37 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/2008/01/16/decoy/#comment-6850 Ah, but is it about me?

Very nice, Dave.

]]> By: dale https://www.vianegativa.us/2008/01/decoy/#comment-6849 Fri, 18 Jan 2008 01:55:22 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/2008/01/16/decoy/#comment-6849 (o)

]]> By: quiet regular https://www.vianegativa.us/2008/01/decoy/#comment-6848 Thu, 17 Jan 2008 17:56:11 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/2008/01/16/decoy/#comment-6848 a mirror image of what’s in the mirror…whew! it’s not about me

]]> By: Crafty Green Poet https://www.vianegativa.us/2008/01/decoy/#comment-6847 Wed, 16 Jan 2008 20:41:11 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/2008/01/16/decoy/#comment-6847 Excellent, I’ve wondered the same thing myself sometimes

]]> By: susan https://www.vianegativa.us/2008/01/decoy/#comment-6846 Wed, 16 Jan 2008 19:24:16 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/2008/01/16/decoy/#comment-6846 persistent as a bad conscience,
haunting as the image of its own death?

very nice. Thanks for the read.

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