https://www.vianegativa.us/2008/10/lake/ Purveyors of fine poetry since 2003. Mon, 30 May 2016 23:10:34 +0000 hourly 1 https://www.vianegativa.us/2008/10/lake/#comment-9049 Wed, 15 Oct 2008 03:07:57 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=2903#comment-9049 The letter as a conversation between poets is perfect for blogging, where it’s simple to click back and forth to understand how the poems have shaped themselves. This one brings to the pond and makes me feel like I know the place, as if it were a mud hole near my own home.

]]> https://www.vianegativa.us/2008/10/lake/#comment-9048 Wed, 08 Oct 2008 18:42:04 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=2903#comment-9048 I like your series of guest writers, Dave. And this work, in particular, pleases. Clear, non-sentimental but emotive. I like the idea of play gone wrong at the get go.

]]> https://www.vianegativa.us/2008/10/lake/#comment-9047 Wed, 08 Oct 2008 18:21:02 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=2903#comment-9047 I saw a “puddle just like this one last weekend, both it and the adjacent woods being cleared for another trophy mansion. Many communities have now become sprawl developments. Our dog Kestrel, a Sheltie, knows better in contrast to some human types.

]]> https://www.vianegativa.us/2008/10/lake/#comment-9046 Wed, 08 Oct 2008 13:55:36 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=2903#comment-9046 This I believe.

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