Comments on: Fist

By: Dave Bonta

Dave Bonta — Thu, 29 Jul 2010 13:23:47 +0000

In reply to mark. "Short-hand"! Thanks for the chuckle.

By: mark

mark — Wed, 28 Jul 2010 13:25:56 +0000

No, hardly bare bones. This was fully fleshed out, albeit in short-hand.

Great piece of writing, Dave.

By: Dave Bonta

Dave Bonta — Wed, 28 Jul 2010 02:49:35 +0000

Thanks, Clive and Maria! Praise from you two makes me think I might’ve gotten it right, though for the longest time yesterday I was convinced that these were only the bare bones of a poem.

By: maria

maria — Tue, 27 Jul 2010 16:44:26 +0000

I was going to comment on the fist-like structure of the poem, but I see I have been beaten to it already. Indeed, well done.

By: Clive Hicks-Jenkins

Clive Hicks-Jenkins — Tue, 27 Jul 2010 06:30:09 +0000

Boy that’s good! A poem like a fist, about a fist. And now it’s stuck like a burr in my mind. Dave, you are one clever, clever man! Well done my friend.