Comments on: Landscape, with Repeating Sounds https://www.vianegativa.us/2011/06/landscape-with-repeating-sounds/ Purveyors of fine poetry since 2003. Tue, 20 Nov 2012 07:08:49 +0000 hourly 1 By: marly youmans https://www.vianegativa.us/2011/06/landscape-with-repeating-sounds/#comment-17521 Tue, 21 Jun 2011 17:29:49 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=12345#comment-17521 Lovely falters, Luisa!

]]> By: Robbi Nester https://www.vianegativa.us/2011/06/landscape-with-repeating-sounds/#comment-17520 Mon, 20 Jun 2011 17:06:43 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=12345#comment-17520 I love the ending, those beautiful moths.

]]> By: Luisa A. Igloria https://www.vianegativa.us/2011/06/landscape-with-repeating-sounds/#comment-17519 Sun, 19 Jun 2011 12:47:26 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=12345#comment-17519 In reply to Rosemary Starace.

Rosemary,
But of course it’s in “the thicket/ where the heart resides…”
Lovely antiphon.
xo

]]> By: Rosemary Starace https://www.vianegativa.us/2011/06/landscape-with-repeating-sounds/#comment-17518 Sun, 19 Jun 2011 12:06:33 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=12345#comment-17518 Dave and Luisa, I found a response in me this morning…

Antiphon

Night falters, songs emerge.
Venus fades into the dawn sky.
Behind the curtain of daylight
she phrases calls that mimic
no other. From the thicket
where the heart resides,
little tambourine sounds.

]]> By: lucychili https://www.vianegativa.us/2011/06/landscape-with-repeating-sounds/#comment-17517 Sun, 19 Jun 2011 11:17:56 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=12345#comment-17517 especially like the light, dark and the wanting green

]]> By: Larry Ayers https://www.vianegativa.us/2011/06/landscape-with-repeating-sounds/#comment-17516 Sun, 19 Jun 2011 06:16:41 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=12345#comment-17516 Very lyrical, Luisa and Dave. The phrasing is flawless/

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