Comments on: What You Don’t Always See

By: Albert B. Casuga

Albert B. Casuga — Thu, 28 Jul 2011 19:07:27 +0000

“A Dream” is my poem response to Luisa’s “What You Don’t Always See” at:
http://ambitsgambit.blogspot.com/2011/07/dream.html

By: Luisa A. Igloria

Luisa A. Igloria — Thu, 28 Jul 2011 17:43:36 +0000

Hi Dale! :)

By: Dale Favier

Dale Favier — Thu, 28 Jul 2011 16:11:33 +0000

Wow.

By: Luisa A. Igloria

Luisa A. Igloria — Thu, 28 Jul 2011 10:44:51 +0000

In reply to Uma. Thanks, Uma.

By: Uma

Uma — Thu, 28 Jul 2011 05:07:24 +0000

Beautiful Luisa! You have left me speechless.

By: Luisa A. Igloria

Luisa A. Igloria — Thu, 28 Jul 2011 04:12:13 +0000

In reply to twitches. Story of my life. The late night (morning) hours. :)

By: twitches

twitches — Thu, 28 Jul 2011 04:10:49 +0000

I’m an hour behind, so it’s just now 11:00 PM here. But I am in graduate school full-time right now, so my hours are pretty whacked out. I tend to stay up until 1-2 AM. :)

By: Luisa A. Igloria

Luisa A. Igloria — Thu, 28 Jul 2011 04:09:23 +0000

Tumbling— I like that! :) You’re up late? or you’re in a different part of planet USA?

By: twitches

twitches — Thu, 28 Jul 2011 03:54:36 +0000

I like how this poem gains momentum as it reaches its conclusion. I kind of tumbled down into it. Very nice!