Comments on: Exam https://www.vianegativa.us/2012/01/exam/ Purveyors of fine poetry since 2003. Wed, 25 Jan 2012 20:12:07 +0000 hourly 1 By: Dale Favier https://www.vianegativa.us/2012/01/exam/#comment-21967 Wed, 25 Jan 2012 20:12:07 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=15193#comment-21967 Heh. My whole life has been a ceremony celebrating successful failure.

]]> By: Dave Bonta https://www.vianegativa.us/2012/01/exam/#comment-21964 Wed, 25 Jan 2012 19:03:20 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=15193#comment-21964 In reply to James.

A+

]]> By: James https://www.vianegativa.us/2012/01/exam/#comment-21963 Wed, 25 Jan 2012 18:48:35 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=15193#comment-21963 1.
(omit)
I drop
through holes
& windows
I can’t explain

2.
I remember
the secrets we…

3.
Two wooden legs
kicking
like a real boy
or half a chair

4.
Bring your rats & birds
the cats
will surely follow

5.
I tell time lies
& time myself
reading analog clocks
to e-books

6.
Queue at the trash bin
crumple your papers
toss them in, mumble
pleas for forgiveness
recite 100 sonnets

7.
M lti g

]]> By: Dave Bonta https://www.vianegativa.us/2012/01/exam/#comment-21959 Wed, 25 Jan 2012 17:17:50 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=15193#comment-21959 In reply to Fire Bird.

Glad this helped wake you up! (The five-hour time difference between here and Britain is something I’ve almost internalized now, believe it or not.)

]]> By: mostly quiet regular https://www.vianegativa.us/2012/01/exam/#comment-21957 Wed, 25 Jan 2012 16:47:16 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=15193#comment-21957 interesting.

]]> By: Fire Bird https://www.vianegativa.us/2012/01/exam/#comment-21946 Wed, 25 Jan 2012 07:33:05 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=15193#comment-21946 heh – it’s 7.32 here!

]]> By: Fire Bird https://www.vianegativa.us/2012/01/exam/#comment-21945 Wed, 25 Jan 2012 07:32:36 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=15193#comment-21945 a great early-morning headspinner

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