Comments on: Disposition matrix: fragments https://www.vianegativa.us/2012/12/disposition-matrix-fragments/ Purveyors of fine poetry since 2003. Thu, 20 Dec 2012 21:51:06 +0000 hourly 1 By: Dave Bonta https://www.vianegativa.us/2012/12/disposition-matrix-fragments/#comment-37851 Thu, 20 Dec 2012 21:51:06 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=21458#comment-37851 In reply to Pica.

I’d be honored.

]]> By: Pica https://www.vianegativa.us/2012/12/disposition-matrix-fragments/#comment-37850 Thu, 20 Dec 2012 21:24:02 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=21458#comment-37850 Mind if I read this out loud tonight in my qigong group?

]]> By: Dave Bonta https://www.vianegativa.us/2012/12/disposition-matrix-fragments/#comment-37846 Thu, 20 Dec 2012 04:24:19 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=21458#comment-37846 In reply to Peter.

Really? I’d forgotten. Thanks for reading and liking this, though. To be honest, I didn’t link it at Facebook or Twitter because I wasn’t sure if it was any good.

]]> By: Peter https://www.vianegativa.us/2012/12/disposition-matrix-fragments/#comment-37845 Thu, 20 Dec 2012 02:38:46 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=21458#comment-37845 In reply to Peter.

(I know I earlier compared another one of your pieces to Scarborough Fair. I have a limited fund of songs.)

]]> By: Peter https://www.vianegativa.us/2012/12/disposition-matrix-fragments/#comment-37844 Thu, 20 Dec 2012 02:09:47 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=21458#comment-37844 This is kind of a poetic first responder. I can process this, so I can begin to process that.

It hit me (an old boomer) like Simon & Garfunkel’s Scarborough Fair, which mixed Vietnam War references in parenthesis among the traditional ballad.

What a final fragment.

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