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By: The Pepys erasure project so far | Via Negativa

The Pepys erasure project so far | Via Negativa — Thu, 21 Feb 2013 23:56:27 +0000

[…] accordance with Marly Youmans’ suggestion in comments, I want to share a few observations about my on-going erasure poetry project with the […]

By: Dave Bonta

Dave Bonta — Thu, 21 Feb 2013 04:52:09 +0000

In reply to marly youmans. Yes, I suppose I should be taking notes on that. Because eventually I will write it up, for sure.

By: marly youmans

marly youmans — Thu, 21 Feb 2013 04:16:57 +0000

Would be fun to read a piece about your changing view of these, and maybe how the way you go about it may have changed as well…

By: Dave Bonta

Dave Bonta — Thu, 21 Feb 2013 01:19:02 +0000

In reply to Ylva Knutsson. Hey, thanks for stopping by.

By: Talk | Via Negativa

Talk | Via Negativa — Wed, 20 Feb 2013 20:29:21 +0000

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By: Ylva Knutsson

Ylva Knutsson — Wed, 20 Feb 2013 19:18:49 +0000

Like it very much! Last tree rows blow my socks off. Just found you on Twitter, but I am allready your fan…so much pleasure, thank you! / Ylva

By: Dave Bonta

Dave Bonta — Wed, 20 Feb 2013 19:00:27 +0000

In reply to Fire Bird. (Oops! Should've been "a pulpit" — fixed now.)

By: Dave Bonta

Dave Bonta — Wed, 20 Feb 2013 18:57:47 +0000

In reply to Jean. Thanks. Yes, I guess so. I was just thinking this morning that I should really be working on more continuity between entries, and conceive of the project as a kind of plotless epic...

By: Dave Bonta

Dave Bonta — Wed, 20 Feb 2013 18:55:32 +0000

In reply to Fire Bird. Thanks! So encouraging to know you're reading along.

By: Fire Bird

Fire Bird — Wed, 20 Feb 2013 11:43:09 +0000

I love the
‘sermon
too eloquent for the pulpit –
the talking rain’

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