Comments on: Chance: Six From a Tarot https://www.vianegativa.us/2013/10/chance-six-from-a-tarot/ Purveyors of fine poetry since 2003. Mon, 11 Nov 2013 02:04:56 +0000 hourly 1 By: Dave Bonta https://www.vianegativa.us/2013/10/chance-six-from-a-tarot/#comment-41462 Mon, 11 Nov 2013 02:04:56 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=25667#comment-41462 In reply to James Stephen.

Now that’s a quality comment! Thanks for stopping by.

]]> By: James Stephen https://www.vianegativa.us/2013/10/chance-six-from-a-tarot/#comment-41456 Sun, 10 Nov 2013 17:33:58 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=25667#comment-41456 I like this so much, I’ll have to précis my feeling about it in a haiku:

Whenever I feel
Like inaudible autumn
Your poems slow down.

You should not listen.
I am a just a brain of keys:
Usual like sun’s pull.

I swallow the sea,
Of which I am not a part
Craving like spring’s tease.

It seems that my fears
Have sunk like old abbey glass
Vulnerably close.

It ended up as four!! :)

]]> By: Dave Bonta https://www.vianegativa.us/2013/10/chance-six-from-a-tarot/#comment-41372 Wed, 30 Oct 2013 04:11:46 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=25667#comment-41372 I love this one.

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