Comments on: Close to home https://www.vianegativa.us/2014/01/close-to-home/ Purveyors of fine poetry since 2003. Wed, 05 Feb 2014 03:41:54 +0000 hourly 1 By: January oddities https://www.vianegativa.us/2014/01/close-to-home/#comment-41982 Sun, 02 Feb 2014 04:07:40 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=27090#comment-41982 […] old outhouse (as noted) appears to be heeding the call of […]

]]> By: Dave Bonta https://www.vianegativa.us/2014/01/close-to-home/#comment-41977 Sat, 01 Feb 2014 20:04:42 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=27090#comment-41977 In reply to barleybooks.

Ah, glad you thought so! Thanks. I have of course been influenced by haiku, though these tercets are looser and longer than “true” haiku.

]]> By: barleybooks https://www.vianegativa.us/2014/01/close-to-home/#comment-41975 Sat, 01 Feb 2014 08:43:08 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=27090#comment-41975 Oh! This is sublime. It says so much more than the words say … very much in the spirit of haiku

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