Comments on: Primary school https://www.vianegativa.us/2014/02/primary-school/ Purveyors of fine poetry since 2003. Fri, 07 Feb 2014 15:54:07 +0000 hourly 1 By: Dave Bonta https://www.vianegativa.us/2014/02/primary-school/#comment-42006 Fri, 07 Feb 2014 15:54:07 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=27121#comment-42006 In reply to Kris Lindbeck (@KrisLindbeck).

I’m all for subtle relationships, but I do like the balance this one strikes between subtlety and obviousness.

]]> By: Kris Lindbeck (@KrisLindbeck) https://www.vianegativa.us/2014/02/primary-school/#comment-42003 Fri, 07 Feb 2014 02:40:46 +0000 http://www.vianegativa.us/?p=27121#comment-42003 I particularly like how the three stanzas work together in this one . . . maybe the relationships in some of the others were too subtle for me . . . :-)

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