Comments on: Laundry poem ending with lines from James Brush

By: Laura M Kaminski

Laura M Kaminski — Tue, 30 Jan 2018 01:38:44 +0000

In reply to Tony Press. I learned some things in the process of writing this one, Tony...with puppy's assistance, of course.

Laura M Kaminski — Tue, 30 Jan 2018 01:37:48 +0000

In reply to Mary McCarthy. Thank you for reading, Mary. This was a fun poem to write!

Mary McCarthy — Thu, 25 Jan 2018 03:25:08 +0000

Wonderful story, and he did teach you something new!!

Tony Press — Wed, 24 Jan 2018 20:04:44 +0000

This whole poem is wonderful. And this: “(The puppy’s
right beside me, delighted
to be teaching this old
dog new tricks.) ” And this: “So here’s me:

sitting on the washroom floor,
also reading someone’s diary,”

Laura M Kaminski — Wed, 24 Jan 2018 18:00:47 +0000

In reply to James Brush. Thank you so much, James. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

James Brush — Wed, 24 Jan 2018 17:14:33 +0000

I like the poem and how you used the lines too. Didn’t even realize where they came from as I was reading it. Well done!