Comments on: Catching a Cranefly: linked verses https://www.vianegativa.us/2020/10/catching-a-dragonfly-linked-verses/ Purveyors of fine poetry since 2003. Sun, 01 Nov 2020 20:32:37 +0000 hourly 1 By: Dave Bonta https://www.vianegativa.us/2020/10/catching-a-dragonfly-linked-verses/#comment-54821 Sun, 01 Nov 2020 20:32:37 +0000 https://www.vianegativa.us/?p=52414#comment-54821 In reply to annamaria48.

Thanks.

]]> By: Dave Bonta https://www.vianegativa.us/2020/10/catching-a-dragonfly-linked-verses/#comment-54820 Sun, 01 Nov 2020 20:32:20 +0000 https://www.vianegativa.us/?p=52414#comment-54820 In reply to Norman Darlington.

Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, the flying-in text was fun at first, but I too found it a little frustrating given the usual more meditative pacing of my videohaikus.

]]> By: Norman Darlington https://www.vianegativa.us/2020/10/catching-a-dragonfly-linked-verses/#comment-54819 Sun, 01 Nov 2020 13:26:28 +0000 https://www.vianegativa.us/?p=52414#comment-54819 I thoroughly enjoyed this solo renku, Dave. As for the video, the three-way combination worked a treat. The only slight irritant for me was the way the fly-in text came in randomly; I’d have preferred to see the words form in order, or all at once, but it’s a really small thing relative to the whole. Well done!

]]> By: annamaria48 https://www.vianegativa.us/2020/10/catching-a-dragonfly-linked-verses/#comment-54818 Sat, 31 Oct 2020 06:55:11 +0000 https://www.vianegativa.us/?p=52414#comment-54818 Great!

]]> By: New videopoem: Catching a Cranefly – Dave Bonta https://www.vianegativa.us/2020/10/catching-a-dragonfly-linked-verses/#comment-54816 Thu, 29 Oct 2020 00:05:10 +0000 https://www.vianegativa.us/?p=52414#comment-54816 […] See Via Negativa for the text and process notes. […]

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