Poetry Blog Digest 2024, Week 41

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A personal selection of posts from the Poetry Blogging Network and beyond. Although I tend to quote my favorite bits, please do click through and read the whole posts. You can also browse the blog digest archive at Via Negativa or, if you’d like it in your inbox, subscribe on Substack (where the posts might be truncated by some email providers).

This week: what’s bothering the clouds, a mausoleum of flowers, slim needles of flow, the hitchhiking dead, and much more. Enjoy.

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Luisa on “Caulbearer” at Poetry Daily

river in November light between bare woods and mountain

Don’t miss this feature on the title poem from Luisa’s new collection Caulbearer at Poetry Daily, as part of their series What Sparks Poetry. Here’s an excerpt:

As an immigrant and a writer in the diaspora, despite the length of time I’ve lived in the U.S. and as a naturalized citizen, I’m still conscious of the feeling of being neither here nor there. There is a fantasy of irrecoverable return, and here is the place to which I’ve carried the ghosts of my own (and perhaps my community’s) nostalgia. Between these two states of being is a veil perishable as a panicle of yucca flowers, sheer as the wings of a yucca moth whose continued existence in an often brutal world depends on mutuality. But it is also a space which I want to imbue with as much tenderness as I can.
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Regular readers might recognize the poem, which first appeared here in January 2019. Read it at Poetry Daily… and order the book from Black Lawrence Press.

After ward

Sam Pepys and me

This morning I ventured by water abroad to Westminster, but lost my labour, for Mr. Montagu was not in town. So to the Wardrobe, and there dined with my Lady, which is the first time I have seen her dine abroad since her being brought to bed of my Lady Katherine. In the afternoon Captain Ferrers and I walked abroad to several places, among others to Mr. Pim’s, my Lord’s Taylour’s, and there he went out with us to the Fountain tavern and did give us store of wine, and it being the Duke of York’s birthday, we drank the more to his health. But, Lord! what a sad story he makes of his being abused by a Dr. of Physique who is in one part of the tenement wherein he dwells. It would make one laugh, though I see he is under a great trouble in it. Thence home by link and found a good answer from my father that Sir R. Bernard do clear all things as to us and our title to Brampton, which puts my heart in great ease and quiet.

a lost war is a road
to no place
to give birth

the lord of abuse
dwells under a title
in great quiet


Erasure poem derived from The Diary of Samuel Pepys, Monday 14 October 1661.

Daughters

river in November light between bare woods and mountain
The novelist said drop daughter
into your proposal and the whole
marketing team will be behind you

because daughter is synonymous
with love and sorrow, conflict
and separation, age, impossible

desire. We laughed but I knew
it was true—all those stories
about blood and bone, how we

felt our way out of blind tunnels
in the same way our mothers and
their mothers and their mothers before

them did, elbowing into a world we
are still demanding make space for us.

Satyr

Sam Pepys and me

(Lord’s day). Did not stir out all day, but rose and dined below, and this day left off half skirts and put on a wastecoate, and my false taby wastecoate with gold lace; and in the evening there came Sir W. Batten to see me, and sat and supped very kindly with me, and so to prayers and to bed.

a day of skirts
my false gold

the evening came
with a prayer


Erasure poem derived from The Diary of Samuel Pepys, Sunday 13 October 1661.

Two haibun

Wrack

You’ve been courting disaster long enough. Isn’t it time you got hitched? You in a suit of rain, with your lucky feet. She in her thunderwear, the ship that launched a thousand faces as close as the phone vibrating in your pocket.

beach bodies rushing to water a stranded whale

from whiptail: journal of the single-line poem, Issue 10 (June 2014)


Raised by Trees

Before my salad days, I was sour as cabbage. I grieved as publicly as a mower for its meadow, cried on every occasion—a virtuoso of tears. Except, my mother noted, when she took me to the woods: as the sky filled with leaves, my last tearful gasp for breath drew in the leaf-mould and the silence and I would fall still. Grief may have been my natural habitat, but the forest soon became my strengthening medicine. Before I even learned to talk, I knew that long sighs could mean happiness among the pines, and that time passes differently in a sunlit glade. And long after I grew out of my bluest period, the forest continued to be a refuge from my own self-centeredness, a place where I could practice being human.

leaping rock to rock the children I never had

from Woodrat Photohaiku, 12 October 2024

Astral

Sam Pepys and me

In bed the greatest part of this day also, and my swelling in some measure gone. I received a letter this day from my father, that Sir R. Bernard do a little fear that my uncle has not observed exactly the custom of Brampton in his will about his lands there, which puts me to a great trouble in mind, and at night wrote to him and to my father about it, being much troubled at it.

someone received
a letter from
my little ear

that outland there
in mind at night


Erasure poem derived from The Diary of Samuel Pepys, Saturday 12 October 1661.

Hibernal

Sam Pepys and me

All day in bed with a cataplasm to my Codd and at night rose a little, and to bed again in more ease than last night. This noon there came my brother and Dr. Tom and Snow to dinner, and by themselves were merry.

a day bed with a cat

a rose in the snow

inner selves


Erasure poem derived from The Diary of Samuel Pepys, Friday 11 October 1661.

Wavy Cap

river in November light between bare woods and mountain
Psilocybe cyanescens


Imagine time as a wave.
I don't mean like some illustrations

in our physics books,
the universe some kind of net,

a grid with a hollow like a hammock
when someone is lying in it, one

of many in a gym or a stadium
waiting out a storm.

No, I want to imagine
time as a wave made of the tiniest particles

moving both forward and backward—
A train pulling in and out of stations

from early morning till night, running on
this idea that something carries us

even if we can't always read the signs
flickering in hallways.