I think I like the first ending better but hard to be sure since it’s gone. :). It read much better this morning after a night’s sleep. I now knew he was schizo but then felt robbed of the pleasure of that earned understanding by your new announcement of a diagnosis. Whether some of the fog shrouding the old last verse would have cleared off overnight as well, I only can wonder. Seems like the f**ked-up something is, the better I’m exercised by it.