Totality

river in November light between bare woods and mountain
It's early April. Only a few more days
till the day when the Moon, passing
between the Sun and Earth,
completely blocks the face of the Sun.

The heavens will darken
as if it were dawn or dusk.
The heavens will darken ominously
as if it were the beginning or end of time.

According to geoscientists,
tidal stress increases during a new
moon, a condition associated with
a total solar eclipse.

With all these constellations
of planetary and other movement,
tsunamis could be spreading
right now through tectonic plates.

We're warned not to turn
our eyes directly toward the Sun.
It could burn earthquakes
right into our brains.

Instead, we look into its reflection
on viewing mirrors. The very trees learn
how to break it apart into hundreds
of bright thumbnails on the ground.

Hard ship

Sam Pepys and me

To my workmen, then to my Lord’s, and there dined with Mr. Shepley. After dinner I went in to my Lord and there we had a great deal of musique, and then came my cozen Tom Pepys and there did accept of the security which we gave him for his 1000l. that we borrow of him, and so the money to be paid next week. Then to the Privy Seal, and so with Mr. Moore to my father’s, where some friends did sup there and we with them and late went home, leaving my wife still there. So to bed.

hen in a dinner tin
we eat sand for the sea

so where
so there
and home still here


Erasure poem derived from The Diary of Samuel Pepys, Thursday 4 April 1661.

Furnish

river in November light between bare woods and mountain
We found a coffeetable
at a thrift store, joyful 
that it was heavy, of solid
wood. Only a few 
nicks here and there.
A hutch 
came later—we marveled
at the way plain glassware
twinkled when a tiny light
was activated.
The rooms filled
with pictures,
gifts of books and 
ancient bows and arrows;
a staff carved from hard-
wood and smoked 
in fire on a Tibetan
mountain. 
Though now we need to,
I still can hardly give 
away the surpluses—
every drawer crammed
with dreams 
of habitation.
Those years ago,
I remember 
when we carried
a long, boxed mirror
between us up
the apartment steps.
It was Halloween; 
people handed out sweets
from their porches and
joked about how maybe
we might have packed
a body in there.

Lubricious

Sam Pepys and me

Up among my workmen, my head akeing all day from last night’s debauch. To the office all the morning, and at noon dined with Sir W. Batten and Pen, who would needs have me drink two drafts of sack to-day to cure me of last night’s disease, which I thought strange but I think find it true.
Then home with my workmen all the afternoon, at night into the garden to play on my flageolette, it being moonshine, where I staid a good while, and so home and to bed.
This day I hear that the Dutch have sent the King a great present of money, which we think will stop the match with Portugal; and judge this to be the reason that our so great haste in sending the two ships to the East Indys is also stayed.

head aching
who needs me
a sack of disease

but I find
the moonshine
in her two hips


Erasure poem derived from The Diary of Samuel Pepys, Wednesday 3 April 1661.

POV

river in November light between bare woods and mountain
A hundred eyes
and yet no witnessing

A head aloft
on shoulders 

Pearled steps
of spine lead

nowhere except
to the mind

Someone pulled up
the ladder 

Everything from there
looks incredibly

far
away

Contrapasso

river in November light between bare woods and mountain
In Dante's Inferno, for every sin there has to be
an equal and fitting punishment. Flatterers, 

seducers, grafters, hypocrites, cephalophores—
for every failing, a torture both material and 

metaphorical. Monks and friars who in life didn't take 
their vow of poverty seriously wear gilded cloaks 

of lead in hell. Those who murdered and killed 
are submerged in rivers of boiling blood, 

and the arrogant are bent over from the weight 
of boulders borne on their backs. Bertran de Born, 

knight then troubadour then monk, caused divisions 
among others, and so he is beheaded. Not only that, he

has to walk around the eighth circle of hell, carrying 
his severed head like a Coleman camping lamp.

Ear

Sam Pepys and me

Among my workmen early and then along with my wife and Pall to my Father’s by coach there to have them lie a while till my house be done. I found my mother alone weeping upon my last night’s quarrel and so left her, and took my wife to Charing Cross and there left her to see her mother who is not well. So I into St. James’s Park, where I saw the Duke of York playing at Pelemele, the first time that ever I saw the sport.
Then to my Lord’s, where I dined with my Lady, and after we had dined in comes my Lord and Ned Pickering hungry, and there was not a bit of meat left in the house, the servants having eat up all, at which my Lord was very angry, and at last got something dressed. Then to the Privy Seal, and signed some things, and so to White-fryars and saw “The Little Thiefe,” which is a very merry and pretty play, and the little boy do very well.
Then to my Father’s, where I found my mother and my wife in a very good mood, and so left them and went home.
Then to the Dolphin to Sir W. Batten, and Pen, and other company; among others Mr. Delabar; where strange how these men, who at other times are all wise men, do now, in their drink, betwitt and reproach one another with their former conditions, and their actions as in public concernments, till I was ashamed to see it.
But parted all friends at 12 at night after drinking a great deal of wine. So home and alone to bed.

my ear is the first
hungry bit of me

a thin little thief
to my fat pen

a roach as public
as a night of wine


Erasure poem derived from The Diary of Samuel Pepys, Tuesday 2 April 1661.

Poetry Blog Digest 2024, Week 13

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Vagrancy

Sam Pepys and me

This day my waiting at the Privy Seal comes in again.
Up early among my workmen. So to the office, and went home to dinner with Sir W. Batten, and after that to the Goat tavern by Charing Cross to meet Dr. Castle, where he and I drank a pint of wine and talked about Privy Seal business. Then to the Privy Seal Office and there found Mr. Moore, but no business yet. Then to Whitefryars, and there saw part of “Rule a wife and have a wife,” which I never saw before, but do not like it.
So to my father, and there finding a discontent between my father and mother about the maid (which my father likes and my mother dislikes), I staid till 10 at night, persuading my mother to understand herself, and that in some high words, which I was sorry for, but she is grown, poor woman, very froward. So leaving them in the same discontent I went away home, it being a brave moonshine, and to bed.

the sea comes in
again to go

I meet a pint of wine
out and about

like a moth under
some high moon


Erasure poem derived from The Diary of Samuel Pepys, Monday 1 April 1661.

Objectivity

river in November light between bare woods and mountain
Objectivity is said to be free of bias, free of perceptions
tinged by emotion and dreams. The problem is we

have no way of determining what that state is like,
since the moment we (think) we approach it, we can't

help putting it on—it's like a raincoat that supposedly keeps
its wearer neutral and dry; reasonable, with deep pocketfuls

of empirical evidence whose purpose is to establish the truth
as truth. Objectivity resides in a sterile chamber without

distraction. But since it can only be confirmed independent
of a mind, I 'm pretty sure there are wall-to-wall mirrors.

How else could it affirm its objectivity than by checking itself out
many times a day? The rest of us live in our porous apartments,

where we can hear the neighbors quarrel then have make-up
sex; and they snore, or sing loud into a karaoke machine.