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  1. I love that last stanza/image. Speaks to me right now!
    I did send a poem to my list today.

    Here it is:

    Tibia Plateau Fracture

    narrows focus to
    the nurse’s call button
    pillow’s position
    water cup
    pain pill
    urinal
    sleep
    pill


  2. Luisa, This is one of those poems where every word seems etched in stone from the onset. Lovely..

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