Two-line haiku

A sudden waft of perfume at 1:00 a.m.:
night-blooming cereus.

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Six hours of broken sleep.
I wake to find a web across my door.

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I eat the good half of a hairy peach
as quickly as I can.

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Distant tropical storm.
A small flock of migrants gusts around the yard.

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Above the blue-and-while dogwood berries,
a blue-and-white warbler.

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22 Comments


  1. 3 a.m., alarm harsh. In the dark summer swelter,
    I make a cup of coffee by touch.

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      1. thanks for adding the blog post link. really enjoyed this unexpected poetic start into the new week.

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  2. The fish with unsleeping, hollow eyes
    holds an ocean of sound in its wooden belly.

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  3. I misread one line three times – substituting “migrant gusts” for “flock of migrants gusts”. Either works, although I rather like the thought of even the winds migrating.

    Your cereus reminds me – my cereus monstrouse bloomed in July after ten years of just sitting in its pot. One a.m. seems to be the time, regardless of variety.

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    1. That was a good misreading! I guess I didn’t write that because I’d already mined the thought for yesterday’s Morning Porch entry, but probably it was still influencing me.

      I’m not sure what variety I have, but blooming twice in two months is quite a surprise!

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  4. Hands smell of sunflower
    after stripping all the buds from the busted stalk.

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  5. Across the street, woman picks fallen leaves
    from her car’s windshield.

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  6. Two-line haikus open doors
    with a crack like the wind blowing through the house.

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    1. see how the poet has restructured the wind as a powerful robot or even with a more gorgeous Queen or Guests waiter to unlock doors –where same species dwell

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  7. Inscribe this flesh with fire sear char burn
    The heat of words a wind before the mind’s inferno

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    1. again here the poet know the power of the word to import huge element sof nature in just few lines of love about ecosystems & whole lot of climate change -flora , fauna inclusive

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  8. And a Chrystalline version:

    Satanic darkness lashes out,
    untroubled sea softly warms the shore.

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    1. this haiku looks simple yet translucent.knowing that light typically annul darkness of whatever origin or malevolence just as the sea s tranquility harvests its grace always or finally@ the shore.

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