Adirondack haiku

near Ampersand summit

At dawn in the campground,
“The Sound of Music” on a flute.
I’m plotting murder.

*

Squatting to pluck puffballs
from a stump, her raincoat
pale in the dark woods.

*

Never mind how
you got here. Just sit,
O glacial erratic.

*
At the back of the store,
a free view of the stormy lake
moving three ways at once.

*

Not far from John Brown’s grave,
a state prison looms
above the larch.

*

When I open the Adirondack
pages of my notebook,
two grains of sand fall out.

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  1. Welcome home! (I assume you’re home. Perhaps you found a hotspot on the trail?)

    The Adirondacks. That’s exotic where I’m from. Hope all is well.

    The final haiku is my favorite. Two worlds in those two grains, maybe.

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  2. Yes, I’m back. Thanks! It was a break from the internet as much as anything. A chance to explore the hinternet instead.

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  3. I like how humans wind their way through your haiku, leaving trails.

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    1. Thanks. Funny you should mention trails, the subject of my next post…

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  4. A lovely photograph, something very haiku in the visual composition (I hope that makes sense). I like your vignettes.

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    1. Thanks, Robin. That was one of my favorite photos from the trip, though I can’t quite explain why. I remember I had to wipe raindrops off the lens and shoot quickly before more could appear.

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  5. Gorgeous photo. I hope it was a great trip! So gorgeous, those mountains.

    I’m diggin’ the first haiku.

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    1. It was a very good trip, though we did lose one day of hiking to steady rain. Camping out was an adventure: it was cold and wet, and the wind blew like fury two nights. But I slept more soundly than I often do in my own bed — go figure.

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