poem ending with a line from another poet

I do not want the skies to open

again & the Writ to sift down

like dust from a mill. It settles

nothing, as I said to our neighbor

the infidel before firing

into the air. We were getting married,

our daughter to his son, & showing

our teeth. My house is your house-

hold now, he said, & I almost wept

with rage. Let us pray together,

I should’ve offered, give thanks

for nothing, for prayers

ignored & virtues

made compulsory, & therefore

meaningless. There is no God

but God, & I’m still His faithful

cur, charged with the hard work

of making people happy.


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Thanks, January!

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12 Replies to “Confounded”

  1. Wow! You’ve taken my line and made it all your own. I love the tension in the poem, lines like “wept with rage” stay with me.

    And I agree what’s already been said, the pacing suits the poem.

    Nice take on the prompt!

  2. (Thanks, all. I’m away from home for a few days and not on my own computer, so my comments will be sparse here even though blog posts continue to appear automagically.)

  3. Hi all – I’m a little abashed at all the comments this thing garnered. I almost like it now myself! But I think I’ll still file it under “interesting exercise.”

    Thanks to everyone for stopping by.

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