sarah – Good point.
robin – Glad you like it, but I’m not sure about “subtle” – I tend to agree with Allan and miguel.
Allan and miguel – Thanks for the critiques – always appreciated! – and for these very helpful tips on how to get rid of that annoying white outline. This was actually a fairly quick and dirty job, because I didn’t think a whole lot of the photo as a composition at first. It’s kind of growing on me now, though, so maybe I’ll give it another shot.