I think this is one of the best tool odes. Perversely I love the use of dangerous, it is the strongest image. This piece is so clever, Dave, unadulterated poetry…..digesting fragments light as air, wonderful. I just read the other comments after I’d given my twopenneth…..(I so dig this edit feature) and I think the third is the strongest stanza, I think it is what gives the poem depth and resonance, go figure :)