October dusk

What do you mean
by knife, by wind?
The bluest sky below the wash
of sunset pink, delectable
as a slice of blue fruit riding
the horizon’s blade.
Half a moon over the barn.
The field of goldenrod fuzz
gathering its sparrows, brown
into brown, poor Sam Peabody
as lamentable as ever:
a song that catches in the middle
like a shirt on a thorn.
The wind dying,
& the color in the trees
darkening like dried blood.

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8 Comments


  1. great, great images. the song like the shirt snagged on a thorn and the ending: “the trees/ darkening like dried blood.” wow.

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  2. Full of good things. And interestingly, as relevant here in Wales as at Plummer’s Hollow. This poem reeks of the year going down into Winter.

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  3. oh i like this a lot. the season is fierce and gentle both and its colours glow and you’ve shown me all that…

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  4. Dave this is breath-taking – been reading it 5 times and every time another line catches my attention before it melts into a smooth and honest october feeling..wow!

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  5. Like they all said, Dave! If it’s a first draft, don’t touch it.

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  6. Thanks, all! Not only a first draft, but a dashed-off one at that. I guess sometimes the Zen saying “first thought, best thought” is true.

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