There’s the sky’s bright wound again, open, gaping.
What time is it? Too long, too heavy, too much.
One can’t properly cook with a toaster oven. Tea with crackers isn’t much
for sustenance. But there are those with the gall to say that’s too much.
Would you really begrudge an elder a share of bread and board?
Would you yell at her: Turn off the lights, the bill’s too much?
There’s the sky’s bright wound again, open, gaping. And its eyes
are bottomless wells, staring. Too naked, too raw, too much.
How much evidence is needed? Here’s fortitude, and making do,
and doing without. At the end of the day, the ache of too much.
I’ve been flame for you, tinder, clay pot. I’ve been the fuse and the hunger,
the ticket and the ticket box. At the end of the day, all too much.
In response to an entry from the Morning Porch.
OTHER POSTS IN THE SERIES
- Bel Canto
- In the Summer Capital
- The Hourglass
- Frost has silvered the grass
- Fragment of a Poem Disguised as SPAM
- Clear bulb of coral inside a paper shade,
- Private: Translucent in the sun, the laurel is a blaze of gloss—
- Kissing the Wound
- Fire Report
- Dear animal of my deepest need, you want to linger
- Ghazal, a la Cucaracha
- Heartache Ghazal
- Ghazal: Some ways to live
- What heart heard of, ghost guessed:
- A single falling note above
- La Caminata
- Dear nearly weightless day,
- Ghazal of the 1 o’clock caller looking for Pomona
- Breaking the Curse
- Milflores, Milflores
- Bad Script
- Ghazal of the Eternal Return
- Letter to the Underneath
- Tall Ships
- Beneath one layer, another and
- Landscape, with Summer Bonfires
- Dear language, most thick
2 Replies to “Heartache Ghazal”
Such a good choice for the refrain. I love the last two couplets with such surprising elements.
My response to Luisa’s Heartache and Dave’s MP is posted in http://ambitsgambit.blogspot.com/2012/04/bright-raw-wound.html