In these, my early (I hope) days of video poetry, I find that the image-rhythm fit you refer to happens way more often than it should. I have no idea why.
I really like how you read this poem. You seem to be getting better at it. Your recent Woodrat podcast with Nic S. really got me thinking about the importance of voice (sigh . . . physical voice) in poetry. (It’s funny that the “find your voice” mantra of the 1960’s workshop coincided with the reemphasis of the oral aspect of poetry.)
And this is one of the best video poems I’ve ever seen. The music is a great choice.
And thanks so much for the plug.